Do you like this poem and why?!
Question: Do you like this poem and why!?
What do you think in this in very honesty !?
you capture me in your eyes
in place where i belong
in beautiful place where your love is all i need
you just capture me in your eyes
when i see you look at me and smile i know you are the one for me
you capture me with your smile
you are the only one i ever wanted in my life
causes baby you always make me smile
you capture me with your smile
you capture me in your eyes
you capture me !.!.!.!.!.you capture me
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you capture me in your eyes
in place where i belong
in beautiful place where your love is all i need
you just capture me in your eyes
when i see you look at me and smile i know you are the one for me
you capture me with your smile
you are the only one i ever wanted in my life
causes baby you always make me smile
you capture me with your smile
you capture me in your eyes
you capture me !.!.!.!.!.you capture me
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Answers:
I kind of like it, but it repeats!. I get what you are saying in the poem, but i think it would sound better if you edited it a little! no offense or anything though! good luck! Www@Enter-QA@Com
NOT BAD BUT THE REPETITION GETS BORINGWww@Enter-QA@Com
It's okay in my opinion!.!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
its a lovely warm verse!.Www@Enter-QA@Com