I need help writing a song...will you help?!
Question: I need help writing a song!.!.!.will you help!?
I wanted to write a song where like I'm in an abusive relationship and I'm like singing to an ex-boyfriend that I loved and telling him that it wasnt always this way!. When I was with him it was okay!. And like asking him if he would have let me go if he knew that this is how things would end up for me!.
So first of all, do you think that would make a good song!?
And second, so far i just have a little part so if you could give me some lines or something!.!.!.I would love that!.
Here is what i have:
He slapped my face and told me to shut up
I started to speak but he said he’d heard enough
He slammed the door and walked on out
And I have nobody to talk to about
About him and his abuse
The way I’m getting used
And I cry not because of the pain
But because things didn’t use to be this way
When I had you
You treated me right
You loved me always
Not just at night
You’d never hurt a hair on my head
Until the night that you said
You were leaving, it's over, goodbyeWww@Enter-QA@Com
So first of all, do you think that would make a good song!?
And second, so far i just have a little part so if you could give me some lines or something!.!.!.I would love that!.
Here is what i have:
He slapped my face and told me to shut up
I started to speak but he said he’d heard enough
He slammed the door and walked on out
And I have nobody to talk to about
About him and his abuse
The way I’m getting used
And I cry not because of the pain
But because things didn’t use to be this way
When I had you
You treated me right
You loved me always
Not just at night
You’d never hurt a hair on my head
Until the night that you said
You were leaving, it's over, goodbyeWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
You were my life,
I gave you my all,
You were my everything!.
But you let me fall,
I will never forget,
What you did to me,
But i hope one day,
You can finally see,
You made me cry,
I fell to my knees,
i cant take this no more,
Help me !.!.!. please!.
May not be what yr looking for but i had a stab at it =)
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I gave you my all,
You were my everything!.
But you let me fall,
I will never forget,
What you did to me,
But i hope one day,
You can finally see,
You made me cry,
I fell to my knees,
i cant take this no more,
Help me !.!.!. please!.
May not be what yr looking for but i had a stab at it =)
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the love you gave me never went to waste,
even though i didn't believe it from the look on your faceWww@Enter-QA@Com
even though i didn't believe it from the look on your faceWww@Enter-QA@Com
Continuation:
yeah goodbye\
I'm never going to see you
I loved you once
but never again \
I no longer care for you
Yo =u treated me wrong
so know I say goodbye!.!.!.!.
Yeah and I no longer care for!.!.!.
Baby< You will never treat me that way again!.!.!.
Never again!
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He slapped my face and told me to shut up
I started to speak but he said he’d heard enough
He slammed the door and walked on out
And I have nobody to talk to about \\
When I had you
You treated me right
You loved me always
Not just at night
You’d never hurt a hair on my head
Until the night that you said
You were leaving, it's over, goodbye
And I cry not because of the pain
But because things didn’t use to be this wayWww@Enter-QA@Com
yeah goodbye\
I'm never going to see you
I loved you once
but never again \
I no longer care for you
Yo =u treated me wrong
so know I say goodbye!.!.!.!.
Yeah and I no longer care for!.!.!.
Baby< You will never treat me that way again!.!.!.
Never again!
]
He slapped my face and told me to shut up
I started to speak but he said he’d heard enough
He slammed the door and walked on out
And I have nobody to talk to about \\
When I had you
You treated me right
You loved me always
Not just at night
You’d never hurt a hair on my head
Until the night that you said
You were leaving, it's over, goodbye
And I cry not because of the pain
But because things didn’t use to be this wayWww@Enter-QA@Com
Awwwwww!.!.!.!.that's such a good song!!! So sad, but sooo good!! I would title it, "It Never Was This Way" or "The Way We Are Never Was" Something to that effect!. Just some advice on the situation in general (it may or may not be you who's in the situation, I'm just giving advice to anyone in that situation), it's really his problem that he's trying to deal with, don't go crying to him and telling him that you're going to end up terrible because he's not the person he used to be!. You have no control over who's he's going to be, or what he wants to be!. And you need not add to his list of problems by being needy and clingy, not willing to let go!. Clearly he's going through something right now, and you should just give him his space, let him think things through, eventually he'll come back if it's meant to be!. "Whatever will be will be!.!.!." Hope this helps :)Www@Enter-QA@Com