What do you think of my rap verse?!
Question: What do you think of my rap verse!?
When the planets are aligned, The gods will be good to mankind
In a timeless existence, where we continue to act with persistence
We feel this obligation, that there is a symbolic representation
That we have this destination, but there is a misrepresentation
Of what we’re all about, And yet beyond any doubt
It is inconsequential, but at the same time consequential
Some of us we are quintessential , yet it’s not essential
We can have the potential to become presidential
Watch out for the competition, that comes at you like ammunition
It will turn into a military mission, came at it with ambition
Feel like I’m sitting in San Quentin, trying to escape to West Berlin
The walls lined with Barb Wire, to get to the other side I have a desire
Trying to sneak pass the guard towers, I don’t have many hours
There’s a matrix of entrapment but to what extent will they torment
Although at Guantanamo what prisoners undergo we don’t knowWww@Enter-QA@Com
In a timeless existence, where we continue to act with persistence
We feel this obligation, that there is a symbolic representation
That we have this destination, but there is a misrepresentation
Of what we’re all about, And yet beyond any doubt
It is inconsequential, but at the same time consequential
Some of us we are quintessential , yet it’s not essential
We can have the potential to become presidential
Watch out for the competition, that comes at you like ammunition
It will turn into a military mission, came at it with ambition
Feel like I’m sitting in San Quentin, trying to escape to West Berlin
The walls lined with Barb Wire, to get to the other side I have a desire
Trying to sneak pass the guard towers, I don’t have many hours
There’s a matrix of entrapment but to what extent will they torment
Although at Guantanamo what prisoners undergo we don’t knowWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
I like it especially the 2nd to 4th lines:'THE GODS WIL B GOOD TO MANKIND IN A TIMELESS EXISTENCE WHERE WE CONTINUE TO B PERSISTENCE' I LIKE IT YO!Www@Enter-QA@Com
It felt like more of a poem to me!. I don't really like reading lyrics though, because you really can determine the flow!. And the flow plays a big role and those who have skill and those who doesn't!. A good flow can make anything sound good!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
it doesnt really feel or seem like a rap song to me
i feel its more like a poem!.!.!.!.!.!.kinda like an enviromentalist type thing!.!.!.but overall its pretty good!.:)Www@Enter-QA@Com
i feel its more like a poem!.!.!.!.!.!.kinda like an enviromentalist type thing!.!.!.but overall its pretty good!.:)Www@Enter-QA@Com
7/10 pts off because there r too many large words that some ppl dont know the meaning of but pretty good :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
5/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
Uhm!.!. Honestly, I'll try not to think of it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com