What do you think about this poem about hip hop?!


Question: What do you think about this poem about hip hop!?
not untill you've listen to Rakim on a rocky mountain top
have you heard hip hop
extract the urban element which created it
and let a open wide country side illustrate it
riding in a freight train
in the freezing rain
listening to Coltrane
my reality went insane
and i think i saw Jesus
he was playing hopscotch with Betty Carter
who was cursing him out
in a scat-like gibberish for not saying 'butterfingers'
and my fingers run through grains of sand
like seeds of time
the pains of man
the frames of mind
which built these frames
which is the structure of my urban superstructure
the trains and planes can corrupt and obstruct your planes of thought
so you that forget how to walk through the woods
which ain't good cuz you ain't never walked through the trees
listenin' to nobody beats the biz and you ain't never heard hip hop
each line a recorded pulse

as if the heart beat wasn't enough
they got us using drum machines now
the hums of the machines
tryin to make our drums humdrums
tryin to question our magic,
insturments be political prisioners up inside computers
as if the heart were not enough,
and as heart beats bring percussions
fallen trees bring reprocussions
citys play upon our souls like broken drums
redrum the essence of creation from city slums,
but city slums mute our drums and our drums become humdrums
cuz city slums have never been where our drums are from
just the place where our daughters and sons become
offbeat heartbeats
slaves to city streets
and hearts get broken and heartbeats stop
broken heartbeats become breakbeats for n-i-g-g-a-s to rhyme on top, but what do they rhyme about!?

Nothin
~Saul Williams~Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
It was ok!. It didn't make me want to read it twice!. Maybe if it was by Kanye West I would like it more, lol!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

BOO!!!!

Why would I listen to Hip Hop on a mountain Top!?

Square nyggah!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

nice word play!.
and nice structure
8!.5/10Www@Enter-QA@Com

i think its cool but i didnt read it all
Www@Enter-QA@Com

yeah I guess I get your point, and some of the rhymes were nice, but some not so much maybe, I get that it was a poem and not actual lyrics, I do like what it's about, it's like every rapper is talking but not saying anything!.

lol, why do so many people wanna be a hater in this room!?Www@Enter-QA@Com



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