Please rate my song lyrics...!?!
Question: Please rate my song lyrics!.!.!.!!?
Here it is: (sorry no title)
The sky is darkening
the end is near
So much hate and sin
So much fear
It needs to be changed!.!.!.
So let the light shine throught the darkness
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.
Our world is closing in
if this doesnt change the world will come to an end
and there will be nuthin left
but an empty hole, in the universe!.!.!.
But then,
God might be able to start over
Try to prevent this fate
And save, the next, generation
From making our mistakes
So let the light shine throught the darkness
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.
But it doesnt have to be this way
It can be changed
It needs to be changed!.!.!.
So let the light shine throught the darkness
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.
So!. much!. pain!.
So there you are!. Please rate them between 1 and 10 and/or give me feedback!. please and thank you!.
Www@Enter-QA@Com
The sky is darkening
the end is near
So much hate and sin
So much fear
It needs to be changed!.!.!.
So let the light shine throught the darkness
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.
Our world is closing in
if this doesnt change the world will come to an end
and there will be nuthin left
but an empty hole, in the universe!.!.!.
But then,
God might be able to start over
Try to prevent this fate
And save, the next, generation
From making our mistakes
So let the light shine throught the darkness
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.
But it doesnt have to be this way
It can be changed
It needs to be changed!.!.!.
So let the light shine throught the darkness
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.
So!. much!. pain!.
So there you are!. Please rate them between 1 and 10 and/or give me feedback!. please and thank you!.
Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Finally! I've been waiting for someone on here to have brilliant lyrics!
But I think you need to work on making them sound better toghter or more Catchy so they will sell!. Cuz they should sell! They NEED to sell! Like, these lyrics have real meaning and speaks reality!. Its very smart and original and unique!. You know not like the simple cliche stuff like "I broke up with my boyfriend" or like "I love you"!. It goes way beyond that which is amazing!. I love how you speak of world change!.
Very good work =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
But I think you need to work on making them sound better toghter or more Catchy so they will sell!. Cuz they should sell! They NEED to sell! Like, these lyrics have real meaning and speaks reality!. Its very smart and original and unique!. You know not like the simple cliche stuff like "I broke up with my boyfriend" or like "I love you"!. It goes way beyond that which is amazing!. I love how you speak of world change!.
Very good work =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
8!.
I myself am i lyric writer!. Is this your only song or do you do more!? I am looking into selling my lyrics!. Your song is almost like a poem which is great, it gives it meaning!. Email me and i will share my lyrics with you!.!.!.!. that was nice,
DarionWww@Enter-QA@Com
I myself am i lyric writer!. Is this your only song or do you do more!? I am looking into selling my lyrics!. Your song is almost like a poem which is great, it gives it meaning!. Email me and i will share my lyrics with you!.!.!.!. that was nice,
DarionWww@Enter-QA@Com
Bit deep may not go down too well on the dance floor but fab lyrics sounds like something by Bob Marley and would sound good to that sort of music well done you clever clogs!Www@Enter-QA@Com
9! very interesting, I liked it a lot!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
whoaa!.!.!. that was beautiful =0 i'm impressed!. i'm definately going to give this an 10!. why!?!? because this part ---->So let the light shine throught the darkness
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.
your words give so much meaning!.!.keep up the good work!. i hope this wont be the last time i see these words!.!. good lux and thank you =)Www@Enter-QA@Com
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.
your words give so much meaning!.!.keep up the good work!. i hope this wont be the last time i see these words!.!. good lux and thank you =)Www@Enter-QA@Com