Is this rap awesome? 1-10?!
Question: Is this rap awesome!? 1-10!?
My lyrical magically cause spiritual travesty
Causing Apocalyptic anarchy of miserable casualties
With the facts i stated cause faith sedated and raided
Making your inner state vacant and naked, devils elated
Of your illogical action causing comical reaction
Trying to be prime causing mathematical fractions
Finding equations that seems to be dividing a nation
Only god's calculator can subtract this radical contraption
-this took me about 5 min to do since i was just rhyming stuff without counting the syallables so i have to say this really fast to beat!.
-also i'm 15!. wowWww@Enter-QA@Com
Causing Apocalyptic anarchy of miserable casualties
With the facts i stated cause faith sedated and raided
Making your inner state vacant and naked, devils elated
Of your illogical action causing comical reaction
Trying to be prime causing mathematical fractions
Finding equations that seems to be dividing a nation
Only god's calculator can subtract this radical contraption
-this took me about 5 min to do since i was just rhyming stuff without counting the syallables so i have to say this really fast to beat!.
-also i'm 15!. wowWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
not feelin' it!.!.!.saying TOO much and using too many "big" words!.!.!.people might want to think when they hear lyrics, but not take a class trying to figure out what you're trying to say!.!.!.ya dig!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
you spent to much time finding big words to try to make yourself look smart, that you forgot that it had to make sense and mean something!.!. ill give it a 6 becasue of thatWww@Enter-QA@Com
It didnt really make sense!.!.!. lol But good job on the rhyming and rhythm, I'd say a 7 because i didnt really get the messege you're trying to convey but its ok as it only took you 5 minutes!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Didn't make any sense!. Rap isn't just about rhyming it has to make sense!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
10's across the board Www@Enter-QA@Com
8Www@Enter-QA@Com
ill give it a 10Www@Enter-QA@Com
to bigg words bahaWww@Enter-QA@Com
look at it once more, does it really make sense!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
i get it!.!.!.those word are to nerdy!.!.!.jkWww@Enter-QA@Com