Here is a song I wrote, What do you think??!
Question: Crazy Feeling
verse 1.
You're the kind of person that I've been
dreaming of, your the kind of person that
I always wanted to love, going through
these changes we can't be like strangers
and I feel like somethings gonna change
in my life cause your not like all the other guys
Chorus
And I don't care what people say they can't
stop me from this crazy feeling inside of me
I know that you are the one, as long as I'm
with you I get this crrrrraazy feeling as long
as this is love it's worth believing in this crazy
feeling
verse 2.
Oh you take my breath away, I don't know how
I could live without you cause I get this crazy
feeling all over again I don't wanna waste my life
without you, without you, cause I got this crrrrazy
feeling that I realllly believe in
Ending (bridge)
And I don't want you to go cause I would loose
this crrrrrazy feeling, crazy feelings make me stay
in love with you, I don't know what I would do without
this craaaazy feeling ooh yeah.
Answers: Crazy Feeling
verse 1.
You're the kind of person that I've been
dreaming of, your the kind of person that
I always wanted to love, going through
these changes we can't be like strangers
and I feel like somethings gonna change
in my life cause your not like all the other guys
Chorus
And I don't care what people say they can't
stop me from this crazy feeling inside of me
I know that you are the one, as long as I'm
with you I get this crrrrraazy feeling as long
as this is love it's worth believing in this crazy
feeling
verse 2.
Oh you take my breath away, I don't know how
I could live without you cause I get this crazy
feeling all over again I don't wanna waste my life
without you, without you, cause I got this crrrrazy
feeling that I realllly believe in
Ending (bridge)
And I don't want you to go cause I would loose
this crrrrrazy feeling, crazy feelings make me stay
in love with you, I don't know what I would do without
this craaaazy feeling ooh yeah.
its pretty cool! you know.. dont bother asking people if they like it.. at least not too many ppl.. because if they say no.. you might feel bad.. just think ... if you like it.. someone else is bound to like it.. no matter where or who they are! :)
i think its pretty good
kinda hard to tell if its good or not just by the lyrics whats the scale that you wrote it in and how does it sound like?
i think its great! are you like one of those people who just write personal songs? cuz i am...
i love it!
I love it...put a nice hip-hop beat to it...hahah cooll