Ugh.... terrible writers block!!!!!?!
Question: you're fading away,
and almost gone.
you're out on the fray,
but i'm still holding on.
i can't see through my tears,
i can't hear through my fears.
because, you're still fading away,
and i'm still holding on.
the scenery changes to gray,
my thinking's foregone.
this is a song i'm writing and i'm trying to use more metaphors, and stuff. if there's any way you could help, i'd really appreciate it! thanks. :)
Answers: you're fading away,
and almost gone.
you're out on the fray,
but i'm still holding on.
i can't see through my tears,
i can't hear through my fears.
because, you're still fading away,
and i'm still holding on.
the scenery changes to gray,
my thinking's foregone.
this is a song i'm writing and i'm trying to use more metaphors, and stuff. if there's any way you could help, i'd really appreciate it! thanks. :)
ok,.....maybe one line will help??
you're slippin away,
and without you i'm done.
you're fading away,
and almost gone.
you're out on the fray,
but i'm still holding on.
i can't see through my tears,
i can't hear through my fears.
because, you're still fading away,
and i'm still holding on.
the scenery changes to gray,
my thinking's foregone
Im not moving a single step
with out you in my arm
I got to accept your leaving me
i just don't want it to be
Your making a path
so you can find your way home
don't go alone
i'll go with you
we'll just roam
you and me
your long gone
i could never catch up
thats all i got write now sorry kinda bad =(
Good luck though!