Is this a good hook?!
Question: What would hip hop be, without a impossible dream/
spending all day cutting pictures out of a XXL magazine/
be true to rap and it will be true to you/
be true by doin what you what you do/
I think it ain't that great, but I suck at writing hooks, but I have been told I got hard verses. Be 110% honest on what you think about it.
Answers: What would hip hop be, without a impossible dream/
spending all day cutting pictures out of a XXL magazine/
be true to rap and it will be true to you/
be true by doin what you what you do/
I think it ain't that great, but I suck at writing hooks, but I have been told I got hard verses. Be 110% honest on what you think about it.
Keep up the good work and don't take any notice of the haters!
nope
Im an award winning songwriter and dont care too much for rap, but I like the lyrics to this...it keeps it VERY real!!! Keep it up friend!! You never know when that break will come along
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good luck and dont give up your dreams...Im living proof that they come true!
It's not that great. Is XXL a hip hop magazine? If not that makes no sense to me.
its SO GOOOD..well sorry that was 100% truth
now for 110%...it was ok..i give 6/10
i dont like the 3rd line.
i am also a writer and ive been taught by some of the best as well as meeting Ludacris, LL, and Jagged Edge. i dont think its great, its okay. something is missing but i just cant tell what it is. maybe it needs to be longer...
hi. i like it. i probaly could not come up with nuffin like that. keep doing ur thing.
I really like that hook...it sounds like your trying to get a good positive message across...the verses must be good!!..ii Lov3 iit!!.....Wish YOu lUck...<3!~!
um...It think tha'ts it's a little long for a hook..hooks are supposed to be catchy, and while this is an okay one, fails to have that "instant catchyness"
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thats a good rap on dat real dough