What do you think bout dis rap?!
Question:
What do you think bout dis rap?
TELL ME WHAT U THINK AND WAT IT MEANS THE MOST ELABORATE GETS 5 POINTS
this reminds me of a guy
10 IQ points shy
critisized because many thought his head wuz 2 high
so he`d hide and lie in wait
stay in a commatose state
ready to battle the literaries over unwinnable debates
bake mistakes in cakes like Betty Crocker
slow walker fast talker
we`d be the boats but he wuz the docker
then one day he suffered defeat
lost all his knowledge he found but couldnt keep
so we let this dreamer sleep
in the depths of the deep
next time you need to look b4 u leap
Answers:
Dont listen to what the other idiots are saying its actually really good... Nots like ur typical fake rap ur trying to leave a message and the kid talking about the Commatose State and Betty Crocker line is an Moron... Stick to what you do and dont change it... Ur lyrics are good and u dont even swear in ur rhymes... U have this part down but if u dont already have it u gotta find ur flow now and ur all set as a mc..