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Question: is this poem good i had to grab ur attention
behind barred teeth and striped discuise
behind the loath anger dispise
if you look deep into his eyes
a tiger cub sits and cries
his mother searches but all in vein
the tiger cub in the pouring rain
in a flood of deep emotional pain
will she see her child again
he learns to hunt and learns to fight
he scours the forrest through the night
he leads the forrest but all in spite
a lonley tiger is this right
behind barred teeth and striped discuise
behind the loath anger dispise
if you look deep into his eyes
a tiger cub sits and cries
the morrel of this story is that people who seem to rule the school like bullies have normally had a bad past
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im 13 y o
Answers: is this poem good i had to grab ur attention
behind barred teeth and striped discuise
behind the loath anger dispise
if you look deep into his eyes
a tiger cub sits and cries
his mother searches but all in vein
the tiger cub in the pouring rain
in a flood of deep emotional pain
will she see her child again
he learns to hunt and learns to fight
he scours the forrest through the night
he leads the forrest but all in spite
a lonley tiger is this right
behind barred teeth and striped discuise
behind the loath anger dispise
if you look deep into his eyes
a tiger cub sits and cries
the morrel of this story is that people who seem to rule the school like bullies have normally had a bad past
feedback
im 13 y o
that was a good poem....i am 13 too.
i bet you used a dictonary....no 23 year old pulls those words out of a hat and knows how to use them....lol im 13 and yeah it wasnt the greatest ive read...
I would have to see you're good for a 13-year-old! I like your rhyming!
I've seen that poem before! You copyrited! You are a loo bag.
that''s not right you copied that!! i heard of it before!!!!
This is very deep, but I can't stand your ryhming style. It distracts so much from the feeling itself. I only use it for line 2 and line 4, or for 1 and 3.