Is this a good idea for a gotham city plot or what?!
Question: Is this a good idea for a gotham city plot or what!?
hey can you guys give me feedback on the "pilot" story of the show i'm making which is called "gotham city" !? the show focuses on the ordinary lives of citizens of gotham, the rich poor and ordinary, as they deal with psycho maniacs and of course, batman!.
ok here's the plot :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
as jessie armstrong, a 15 year old girl living in an apartment building with her two sisters and mother, heads off to school with her best friend, lance simpson, they witness a fight!. after talking about how batman is attracted to crime at night, lance, who is obsessed with batman, decides he will fake a crime that looks real, (beating up a dummy in an alley,) and batman will come!. jessie, who is very overprotective of people, tries to persuade him not to do that, because it's too dangerous in the streets of gotham, especially at night!. lance is seemingly convinced!. later that night, lance, unbeknownst to jessie, commits his "crime" and is met by a shadowy bat figure!.!.!.!. meanwhile, jessie's college age older sister, samantha, is interning at arkham asylum!. while training with a psychiatrist, the calender man comes for his weekly therapy session!. the psychiatrist tells samantha that if a paitent starts going a little over the edge, slap him real hard to get his attention back!. samantha tells this to jessie, and jessie thinks it's inhumane!. she disagrees with how samantha and her mother, (who's a pschologist at arkham) treat the prisoners, and gets in a fight with them!. down in the poor area of gotham, kate staplin, who is a hard-working teenager trying to support her family with hermother, sees her lazy, drug-doing twin sister lindsay run in with their kid brother, tommy, who is shot by a stray bullet in a gang fight, and the shot could be fatal!. also, johnathan innux, head of innux inc!. (computer company,) gets a meeting with oswald cobblepot!. oswald wants to help Innux and his company get more endorsement and to become more successful, in exchange for 40% of the sales of the company!. Innux refuses, and oswald tells him that "he'll be sorry!.) meanwhile, Innux's daughter, elizabeth, an airhead spoiled brat who was told by her mother's brother (a corrupt cop) that batman is a bad person, speaks badly about batman publicly during a fundraiser thrown by bruce wayne, and therefore she is now very unpopular!.
^^ well that's how the first episode's gonna run!. tell me what you think!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
ok here's the plot :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
as jessie armstrong, a 15 year old girl living in an apartment building with her two sisters and mother, heads off to school with her best friend, lance simpson, they witness a fight!. after talking about how batman is attracted to crime at night, lance, who is obsessed with batman, decides he will fake a crime that looks real, (beating up a dummy in an alley,) and batman will come!. jessie, who is very overprotective of people, tries to persuade him not to do that, because it's too dangerous in the streets of gotham, especially at night!. lance is seemingly convinced!. later that night, lance, unbeknownst to jessie, commits his "crime" and is met by a shadowy bat figure!.!.!.!. meanwhile, jessie's college age older sister, samantha, is interning at arkham asylum!. while training with a psychiatrist, the calender man comes for his weekly therapy session!. the psychiatrist tells samantha that if a paitent starts going a little over the edge, slap him real hard to get his attention back!. samantha tells this to jessie, and jessie thinks it's inhumane!. she disagrees with how samantha and her mother, (who's a pschologist at arkham) treat the prisoners, and gets in a fight with them!. down in the poor area of gotham, kate staplin, who is a hard-working teenager trying to support her family with hermother, sees her lazy, drug-doing twin sister lindsay run in with their kid brother, tommy, who is shot by a stray bullet in a gang fight, and the shot could be fatal!. also, johnathan innux, head of innux inc!. (computer company,) gets a meeting with oswald cobblepot!. oswald wants to help Innux and his company get more endorsement and to become more successful, in exchange for 40% of the sales of the company!. Innux refuses, and oswald tells him that "he'll be sorry!.) meanwhile, Innux's daughter, elizabeth, an airhead spoiled brat who was told by her mother's brother (a corrupt cop) that batman is a bad person, speaks badly about batman publicly during a fundraiser thrown by bruce wayne, and therefore she is now very unpopular!.
^^ well that's how the first episode's gonna run!. tell me what you think!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
I think a show based in Gotham city that focuses on just average people in the city, rather than only on Batman and his villains could be a pretty interesting show! They could still have Batman/Bruce Wayne character in it, but make him less prominent than the other characters in the cast!. But sadly I'm sure that it wouldn't ever happen, still an interesting idea!Www@Enter-QA@Com