Does anyone like this? It's my soap opera. Please read and state your honest!
Question: Here's Part one of Tomorrow Sunsets.
Town: Sunrise Valley (made it up - but thatnks for the answers that you guys gave to me..... they helped me think up this one!)
Day 1: Tomorrow Sunsets
Monday
Laura: He’s really gone.
AJ: Mom, it’s okay.
Laura: No AJ, it’s not. My son is dead. Your brother.
AJ: Half brother actually.
Laura: Is this really a time to critique my every move? I want to succeed AJ, and I wanted Edward to too.
Answers: Here's Part one of Tomorrow Sunsets.
Town: Sunrise Valley (made it up - but thatnks for the answers that you guys gave to me..... they helped me think up this one!)
Day 1: Tomorrow Sunsets
Monday
Laura: He’s really gone.
AJ: Mom, it’s okay.
Laura: No AJ, it’s not. My son is dead. Your brother.
AJ: Half brother actually.
Laura: Is this really a time to critique my every move? I want to succeed AJ, and I wanted Edward to too.
Seriously the dialog is trite even for soap writing. and it all ready sounds like very other soap on the air. Past time for something different
I didn'y quite get it
Ok no offense but i hate GENERAL HOSPITAL
You must be a GH fan? You might want to use different names.