Truthfully, what do you think of this poem?!
Question: Truthfully, what do you think of this poem!?
i hold this sentiment you've left for me
close to my heart
and it feels as if i'm beside you again
i can no longer feel the weight of the miles between us
and so clearly in my mind
i see your smile
then, i feel your touch
but- as quickly as my reveries were made real!.!.!.
they become lies
as reality comes crashing down
disappointment then creeps forth, into my soul
and makes it homeWww@Enter-QA@Com
close to my heart
and it feels as if i'm beside you again
i can no longer feel the weight of the miles between us
and so clearly in my mind
i see your smile
then, i feel your touch
but- as quickly as my reveries were made real!.!.!.
they become lies
as reality comes crashing down
disappointment then creeps forth, into my soul
and makes it homeWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Pretty good and an unexpected ending!. I like it!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
synonym for sentiment
take away "then" in line 7
synonym for reveries
synonym for lies
take away "then" in line 11
I don't get last line!.
Otherwise, good poem!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
take away "then" in line 7
synonym for reveries
synonym for lies
take away "then" in line 11
I don't get last line!.
Otherwise, good poem!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
faith brought us as far as we will be
in the future we shall be together
for now we will go seperate ways
doing the same good work
we will always be together
the spirit of God is our connection
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in the future we shall be together
for now we will go seperate ways
doing the same good work
we will always be together
the spirit of God is our connection
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a kind of a lovely poemWww@Enter-QA@Com
It's not bad - write more and you will improve!Www@Enter-QA@Com
nicely doneWww@Enter-QA@Com
pretty good
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It is very well done!.!.!.!.very sad tooWww@Enter-QA@Com
aww i really like it ^_^ have a starWww@Enter-QA@Com
I prefer poems that rhyme, but that's just me !Www@Enter-QA@Com
i think it's good but the second half needs to flow moreWww@Enter-QA@Com