A random verse... do you think it's any good?!


Question: A random verse!.!.!. do you think it's any good!?
My time has been wasted, face it
wishing i would've been places
my self-pity has been tasted
i make it!.!.!. into a personal hell
sipping pissed off out of the water well
with stolen goods to sell
i fell into heaven to hate where i stayed
i played the cards i dealt to myself
f*** wealth and the rest of that sh**
I take slow hits and drink alcohol
my language is basic like i'm programming
stabbed in the heart, can't mourn
so smoke a gram in it's memory if you can
while i try to find some food for the pots & pans
my hands getting bony, rarely eating and hiding it from showing
you don't know me, you probably don't want to
suicidal i've got to be!.!.!. the conflict is being me
these barely drunken random ramblings
my life is all about gambling with nothing but pain
i know that i'm dying inside whenever there's no rainWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
yer tis goodWww@Enter-QA@Com

its ok but its a little dark
id give it a seven out of tenWww@Enter-QA@Com

Yes, it sorta is!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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