Is this poem contest worthy?!
Question: Is this poem contest worthy!?
I want to enter a poem I wrote in a contest, but is it worthy!?
There is a place I've heard of
A place where the birds soar high
Endlessly in the open sky
A place safely hidden away from the World's troubles
Getting there is another story
No one has seen the place
Yet everyone believes it's there
Only time and patience
Will lead you down it's long course
You may think it will never end
Temptations to stray may rise
Yet one must remember to
Stick to the course
To some the path is long
To others it is short
Everyone's path is different
Not two the same
But they all end up in the same place
The "special" placeWww@Enter-QA@Com
There is a place I've heard of
A place where the birds soar high
Endlessly in the open sky
A place safely hidden away from the World's troubles
Getting there is another story
No one has seen the place
Yet everyone believes it's there
Only time and patience
Will lead you down it's long course
You may think it will never end
Temptations to stray may rise
Yet one must remember to
Stick to the course
To some the path is long
To others it is short
Everyone's path is different
Not two the same
But they all end up in the same place
The "special" placeWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
It would help if I knew what grade it was for!. However it is ok so far to make it better i would consider revising it or adding more adgetives!. If you do revise it I think that you could probably enter the contest, however their is no guarntee that you will win!. Wish you luck!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Go for it!. The worst that can happen is that you don't win!. Then you just learn from it and try again!. If you don't try then you'll never know if it was 'good enough' or not!.
My opinion - the beginning made me think of the Wizard of Oz!. Other than that, it's okay!. A little too 'don't give up life' preachy for me, a little cliched!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
My opinion - the beginning made me think of the Wizard of Oz!. Other than that, it's okay!. A little too 'don't give up life' preachy for me, a little cliched!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's a nice poem but I'm not sure it's contest worthy!. I think if you would've stated what place it would be better!. To me it just doesn't come together at the end!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
yes it is!.
every body wants to go to heaven but nobody wants to go nowWww@Enter-QA@Com
every body wants to go to heaven but nobody wants to go nowWww@Enter-QA@Com
I got the "young grass-hopper" vibe from it!. (hahaha) other than that, pretty nice!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's worthy
Good LuckWww@Enter-QA@Com
Good LuckWww@Enter-QA@Com
yes, definately!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
yes totally Www@Enter-QA@Com
Tip #1:Never post your ideas on the internet!.People like to take others ideas!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yes i like it a lot!. Enter it, you won't know unless you try!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
it's up lesbos @ss worthyWww@Enter-QA@Com
Thats really good! Is it about Heaven!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
I like it!Www@Enter-QA@Com
GOT ME IN TEARS OVER HERE!! DOES THAT ANSWER YOUR QUESTION!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Go for it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
its aiight]
but make it rhyme moreWww@Enter-QA@Com
but make it rhyme moreWww@Enter-QA@Com
yeahh it's really good :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
sure
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omg that is so funny lol no its realy messed upWww@Enter-QA@Com
maybe, you should test it with a proWww@Enter-QA@Com
why dont u enter it in one, you havent got anything to loseWww@Enter-QA@Com
why would u think its not worthy
man i luv it
yes it definitely worth it :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
man i luv it
yes it definitely worth it :)Www@Enter-QA@Com