My poem please correct and rate.?!
Question: My poem please correct and rate!.!?
Its a reask because i want answers =)
I'm sorry I didn't stop,
Hurting you that way!.
I know you realized it too,
Why did you want to stay!?
Don’t tell me you didn’t care,
There's a reason you stayed there!.
I know you know it too,
There's nothing more I can do!.
Give up your pride,
You're still mad inside!.
Its done and said,
What's left to dread!?
Yet you fear to get too close,
And everybody knows,
The pain I caused you that day,
Might never fade away!.
Shattered hearts, will repair!.
You'll be fine, when I'm there!.
When I leave, you can trust!.
The past is behind, time to adjust!.
My mistake is done,
My heart you won!.
He's out of my mind,
Everything is fine!.
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I'm sorry I didn't stop,
Hurting you that way!.
I know you realized it too,
Why did you want to stay!?
Don’t tell me you didn’t care,
There's a reason you stayed there!.
I know you know it too,
There's nothing more I can do!.
Give up your pride,
You're still mad inside!.
Its done and said,
What's left to dread!?
Yet you fear to get too close,
And everybody knows,
The pain I caused you that day,
Might never fade away!.
Shattered hearts, will repair!.
You'll be fine, when I'm there!.
When I leave, you can trust!.
The past is behind, time to adjust!.
My mistake is done,
My heart you won!.
He's out of my mind,
Everything is fine!.
Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
I loved it , wow I wish I had half of your talent to ever write a poem like that!. Incredible & Brilliant , also sad
I'd rate it a 10Www@Enter-QA@Com
I'd rate it a 10Www@Enter-QA@Com