What do you think about this??? PLEASE BE HONEST!?!


Question: What do you think about this!?!?!? PLEASE BE HONEST!!?
I wrote this song today, and I wanted to know what you think of the lyrics and everything, thanks! Here it is:
What did I do to make you act this way!?
You gave me glares and then just walked away,
I gave you all my trust and my respect,
What happened to those promises you kept!?
We were best friends since the 1st grade,
But now look at all the new friends you made,
You'll crash are plans, and then never call me back,
What's with the trust and honesty you lack!?
Somehow my secrets are around the school,
And then you'll brag about how your so cool,
You'll talk about me in the gym locker room,
And you know I'm standing right next to you,
I just dont know how much more I can take,
Come on, give me a break,
I just need to stand up and hold my head high,
I'll erase those snobby lies,
I'll make new friends and forget about you,
I've got nothing to lose, I'm just as good as you,
And I'll wipe away my tears and recognize,
That I let you put me down way to long,
And that's why I wrote this song,
Yeah, I'm done with you,
Yeah, I'm over it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
Oh wow!.
that's!.!.!.amazing!.
i don't even know you and i almost cried!
:) you're really talented!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Wow!.
This is pretty good!.

Personal experiences like that usually make for a good song!. Haha!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

OMG!!!! thats a great song!!!! i wish i could hear the music to go with it!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

I see it in more
of a poem than a song!.
but the lyrics are good!.
Wowza!.(:Www@Enter-QA@Com

theres no chorusWww@Enter-QA@Com

terrible stay in schoolWww@Enter-QA@Com

UHMM!.!.!.IDK Www@Enter-QA@Com

ohmigod i love it!!!!!! is it true!?!?Www@Enter-QA@Com

i like it its nice!!!
:]Www@Enter-QA@Com

luv it! :]Www@Enter-QA@Com

wow i love it!. Www@Enter-QA@Com



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