How's this poem.....??!
Question: How's this poem!.!.!.!.!.!?!?
Ok so this poem is made by me, my first poem, ha ha =]]
Hope you guyz enjoy reading this -
"I Know, One Day You'll Be There!.!.!."
You left me all alone in this world
Among cheaters, fake and unreal people,
Never thought what I would feel
After all this!.!.
But I know, one day you’ll realise, and regret for whatever you’ve done…
My heart says so…
You’ll never understand what my heart feels for you!.!.
And I know thats strange!
Why did you ever leave me and go…
What was wrong with me!?
I’ll wait for you, and I know one day you’ll come back!.!.
To bring back my lost smile…
My heart cries every moment,
Whenever I think of the time I spent with you…
I wish I could ever get you back…
You're truly the one I wanted…
I will never be able to live without you…
So I’d rather die…
I’ve always cared for you!.!.
And will…until the day I die…
No matter whatever happens…
I’ll never leave your hand and go away…
I’m scared of losing you…
But now it’s too late…
As I’ve lost you…
And now I want you back…
And I know, one day you’ll be there…
To wipe off my tears…and bring back my faded smile!.!.!.
Thanks for your kind response:)
*~HaVe FuN~*
Www@Enter-QA@Com
Hope you guyz enjoy reading this -
"I Know, One Day You'll Be There!.!.!."
You left me all alone in this world
Among cheaters, fake and unreal people,
Never thought what I would feel
After all this!.!.
But I know, one day you’ll realise, and regret for whatever you’ve done…
My heart says so…
You’ll never understand what my heart feels for you!.!.
And I know thats strange!
Why did you ever leave me and go…
What was wrong with me!?
I’ll wait for you, and I know one day you’ll come back!.!.
To bring back my lost smile…
My heart cries every moment,
Whenever I think of the time I spent with you…
I wish I could ever get you back…
You're truly the one I wanted…
I will never be able to live without you…
So I’d rather die…
I’ve always cared for you!.!.
And will…until the day I die…
No matter whatever happens…
I’ll never leave your hand and go away…
I’m scared of losing you…
But now it’s too late…
As I’ve lost you…
And now I want you back…
And I know, one day you’ll be there…
To wipe off my tears…and bring back my faded smile!.!.!.
Thanks for your kind response:)
*~HaVe FuN~*
Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
its very sentimental and touching
as afirst attempt its brilliant
im sure ur beloved one will definately respond to this
anyways if u continue writing poems make sure they rhyme or have a tune
it'll make ur poems more beautiful and attractive
keep writing
good luck!Www@Enter-QA@Com
as afirst attempt its brilliant
im sure ur beloved one will definately respond to this
anyways if u continue writing poems make sure they rhyme or have a tune
it'll make ur poems more beautiful and attractive
keep writing
good luck!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Since i know what your problem is, a small piece of advice :
You should stop believing people online, especially the guys!.
Most of them are here with a plan, just becarefull, dont be their victim!.
And your poem is good, i rate it 10/10 since its your true feelings!.
I have read many of these poems here
They were all the same case as yours!.
B E C A R E F U L L
Cheers!Www@Enter-QA@Com
You should stop believing people online, especially the guys!.
Most of them are here with a plan, just becarefull, dont be their victim!.
And your poem is good, i rate it 10/10 since its your true feelings!.
I have read many of these poems here
They were all the same case as yours!.
B E C A R E F U L L
Cheers!Www@Enter-QA@Com
i looked at her carefully!.!.everyone thought she is smiling!.!.look a li'l more closely,u'll find tears in her eyes!.!.but why is she crying!?!? why!?!? it is said 'dont cry for a guy who doesnt deserve ur tears,cuz the one who deserves wont ever ever make you cry!.!.'
choose what u want!? happiness or pain from Love!?!? i chose pain!.!.i dont want u to do that! choose happiness!.!.u deserve that!
take care!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
choose what u want!? happiness or pain from Love!?!? i chose pain!.!.i dont want u to do that! choose happiness!.!.u deserve that!
take care!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
very nice, if he doesn't respond then to hell with him, move on, all you can do, good luck!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Matured thinkingWww@Enter-QA@Com
you know wat!.!.!.ppl always right good poems when they're in the moment!.!.!.so wat moment were you in!?!?!?
sounds like you want someone backWww@Enter-QA@Com
sounds like you want someone backWww@Enter-QA@Com
That's marvellous!. U really have a creative bent of mind!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Keep writing and keep going!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
**HAVE A GOOD DAY**Www@Enter-QA@Com
Keep writing and keep going!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
**HAVE A GOOD DAY**Www@Enter-QA@Com
I liked it!. I wished it had a rhyme scheme but I still enjoyed it, without!. :^D
7!.75/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
7!.75/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
Thats a nice poem!. Keep writing and have fun!.
Goodnight!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Goodnight!Www@Enter-QA@Com
so sweet ~~ Www@Enter-QA@Com
so nice keep upWww@Enter-QA@Com
poorWww@Enter-QA@Com
hi as a starter this is a nice poem!.
keep going princess!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
keep going princess!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
dosen't ryhme but good thoughWww@Enter-QA@Com
good effort!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
great
keep it upWww@Enter-QA@Com
keep it upWww@Enter-QA@Com
it's awesome!!
it shows u've written this direct dil se, so it touched my heart also!.!.!. lovely!! :))
keep it up!.!.!. !! Www@Enter-QA@Com
it shows u've written this direct dil se, so it touched my heart also!.!.!. lovely!! :))
keep it up!.!.!. !! Www@Enter-QA@Com