Is this good so far? tnxX!
Question: Is this good so far!? tnxX
Hi everyone, this is an essay i have to do for summer i'm wondering if it sounds good so far!. btw im in the 8th grade!.
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I know this has nothing to do with Polls and Surveys but I found that a majority of the people are located in this section!.
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The sequel “Let the Circle Be Unbroken” by Mildred D!. Taylor was a very intriguing and dynamic piece of work!. I chose this sequel because I had formerly read “Roll of Thunder Hear My Cry,” and found it to be exceedingly compelling in my opinion!. “Let the Circle Be Unbroken,” brought me back to the retrospective years in which slavery had occurred!. The anthology helped me to acquire how prosperous this generation is, due to the fact that slavery no longer exists in our prevailing posterity!. In my opinion “Let the Circle Be Unbroken” had a very drastic and influential repercussion on me because it exposed how much our state of laws and the people of America have cultivated in the position we are now in!. Overall “Let the Circle be Unbroken,” was exceptionally enchanting and stimulating!.
I know this has nothing to do with Polls and Surveys but I found that a majority of the people are located in this section!.
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