Do you like what I've written?!


Question: Do you like what I've written!?
I'm writing a poem (and/or song depending on how it fits in the end) I know the end just kind of!.!.!.ends but I think it's because I got writer's block lol, so tell me what you think, THANK YOU!

Playing his song on somebody else's heart strings
You're dancing along to the melody that mockingbird sings
Casanova's free tonight without guilt and without plight
He's got a lady, but you've got a light
So light that cigarrette Audrey, you've got no soul to sell
Is the afterglow worth all the pain you'll have to tell!?
Raging in the middle of a storm never made you feel so aliveWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
the next line should use they rhmy word dive (just a suggestion)

very cool poem tho!. keep writing and expanding on it!Www@Enter-QA@Com



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