What do you think of this poem that I wrote for my friend she died?!
Question: What do you think of this poem that I wrote for my friend she died!?
!.!.!. So I wrote this when my friend died, it's kind of her story
My hearts broken for what happened to you
Your decision to cross that road effected everyone you knew
It wasn't your fault, you crossed so innocently
Not knowing what would happen you took step two
You turned around and saw a bright light
Instinctively you screamed, no time for you to run
Halloween was over, it wasn't anymore fun
There you were lying on the floor, not putting up much of a fight
Your seconds were being counted but none really ever knew
The ambulance soon came, the screeching noises of hell
they all went running to the meek innocent cry
But little did they know that your spirit would soon fly
Sudden;y dead silence fell
Nothing but your whimper
Nothing but your call
You were rushed to the hospital with costume and all
Your clothes were ripped off
they tried to stop the bleeding
Now it would soon be close to your end
They left you there waiting to see if you survive
but your hearWww@Enter-QA@Com
My hearts broken for what happened to you
Your decision to cross that road effected everyone you knew
It wasn't your fault, you crossed so innocently
Not knowing what would happen you took step two
You turned around and saw a bright light
Instinctively you screamed, no time for you to run
Halloween was over, it wasn't anymore fun
There you were lying on the floor, not putting up much of a fight
Your seconds were being counted but none really ever knew
The ambulance soon came, the screeching noises of hell
they all went running to the meek innocent cry
But little did they know that your spirit would soon fly
Sudden;y dead silence fell
Nothing but your whimper
Nothing but your call
You were rushed to the hospital with costume and all
Your clothes were ripped off
they tried to stop the bleeding
Now it would soon be close to your end
They left you there waiting to see if you survive
but your hearWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
first of all i think your a very good friend for even thinking about writing a poem for her!. when i read your poem i was touched!. yuo are a good personWww@Enter-QA@Com
Other teenagers will be able to relate to your poem!. I'm sorry for the lose of your friend!. Remember to talk about your friend, don't bottle up your sadness!. That in itself would make more victims!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It is very good!. Sorry about what happen to your friend!Www@Enter-QA@Com