Rate this on a 1-10 scale... please!?!


Question: Rate this on a 1-10 scale!.!.!. please!!?
A smile spreads across your beautiful face,
my heart seems to stop as our fingers lace,
I place my hand on your thigh,
looking into your dark brown eyes,
sliding my hand up your leg,
trying hard not to beg!.
i grab your hand,
our next actions!.!.!. unplanned,
i wrap my arms around your waist,
i kiss your lips just for a taste!.
i love your touch,
ever so much,
its you ill never forget
something i wont regret
because the way you made me feel,
its just so realWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
9, I love the sense of rush that you put in the poem and also the descriptiveness
Only thing I ask for next poem/prose is a deeper meaning, maybe I missed one!. But I just like more stuff written in between the lines!. Though the exact opposite could be said about that, your poem's message is very clear which is a really good thing!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

I give it a 7!. I think the last two lines need to be revised a little because they aren't in the same rhyming scheme as the rest of it!.!.!.the last line just seems to be hanging unless this is a song rather than a poem!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

On a scale from 1-10, I will give your poem a 7!.
It was very nice, but it left me wanting more, add a little more next time! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

10Www@Enter-QA@Com

6
the rhymes are good
but it's predictableWww@Enter-QA@Com

8, i just don't like from " something i won't regret>>>>and down!. it needs something more powerfulWww@Enter-QA@Com

8

unusual concept but it payed offWww@Enter-QA@Com

honestly, i thought that was a perfect 10!.
i understood exactly what was going on, and usually im terrible at poetry!.

great job, be sure to write more!Www@Enter-QA@Com

3 + 2 + 1 + 4 = TEN!Www@Enter-QA@Com

7, i like alot of it, if you wrote it, impressiveWww@Enter-QA@Com

8ishWww@Enter-QA@Com

This was awesome! 8!.5 because I think it could be SLIGHTLY revised to be even better!. Very touching though!.!. :DWww@Enter-QA@Com

1 - too long, didn't read!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

8
nice
a bit cheesyWww@Enter-QA@Com

11Www@Enter-QA@Com

12!.5765765765765765Www@Enter-QA@Com

9Www@Enter-QA@Com

8Www@Enter-QA@Com

6Www@Enter-QA@Com

5Www@Enter-QA@Com

10Www@Enter-QA@Com

7!.5Www@Enter-QA@Com

10!.5Www@Enter-QA@Com

10 but all your lines are short and you are doing just obvious rhymesWww@Enter-QA@Com

awww that is so nice!. i love it!. a 9!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

I love it, 10Www@Enter-QA@Com

its pretty legit!.!.!. i thought it was going to become very sexual though!.!.!. 8Www@Enter-QA@Com

Seriously!.!.This is GOOD!!! This is the best one I've read on here by far! I'd definaitly say 10!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

lets get it onWww@Enter-QA@Com

that's really good=] 8!.5! yayyyyyyWww@Enter-QA@Com

that is soooo good!!!!!!!!!!! 9Www@Enter-QA@Com



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