Whatcha think of my love poem?!
Question: ~?~?~?~
I'll put u in a pickle jar
And change ur name to vinegar!
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Answers: ~?~?~?~
I'll put u in a pickle jar
And change ur name to vinegar!
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That sounds like an insult. Like your saying he is bitter like vineger. It is a reference like calling some one salty when there annoyed. I like the pickle reference ; )
wow
Boring...(Yawn!)
uhmmm lol it's nice?
I hate it. It isn't a love poem at all and it doesn't make since.
amazing
Sorry to say, it sounds more like a one-liner than a poem.
Here is an example of a short love poem:
Our lives pass by, so fast it seems
tomorrow is hope, the past is but dreams
As time goes by, know this is true
I hope to only dream of you
ok................It needs more words, but its good rhyming.
great
not so lovely
its alrigth
Wow!! that was so inspiring! LOL You should see about having it published!! x
LOL PRETTY GOOD!
OK!!!!
HAHAHHA!nice!xD
That is an absolutely beautiful poem!
intersting....
best answer...?
Not much
i think its cute
?and?i?like?cute?things?
Add to it:
When it gets all nice and sour
Taste it for a half an hour!
Sorry...that was uncalled for...sorry!
awesome
when u say change ur name to vinegar it sounds like you don't like her coz vinegar is horrible
Ahhhhhhhhh...Ummmmmm......Very Creative?Idk i dont want to tell you it stinks.
!~Deidre~!
LMAO> kinda "sour"
I think it sucks, no offense. You could do better than that. Good luck.
that's not a poem.....try again
its cute ahaha...hhmmm
should be in a childrens book!!!
I love it!!! I only wonder what gave you the inspiration for it!
it is great - goodluck !
Time to get a cat, or a hamster.