If this good peom?!
Question: Everytime I look at you, I quickly look away
because I’m afraid of what all the kids will have to say
and what you will think of me for looking at you this way
but I’ll glace back for just a second to see if my dreams are true
that everytime I look at you
you're looking at me too.
Answers: Everytime I look at you, I quickly look away
because I’m afraid of what all the kids will have to say
and what you will think of me for looking at you this way
but I’ll glace back for just a second to see if my dreams are true
that everytime I look at you
you're looking at me too.
i dont get your rhythm/meter.
but i guess its cute.
kinda clichéd and overdone...
cute
No, I don't like it.
So so. Not bad.
If you're a fourth grader.
It's kinda corny-
but it'll get someone to smile.
Mediocre
maybe.
it's nice. Short and sweet
Jonathan :)