What do you think of this? i wrote this during Social Studies?!
Question: As the rain falls on my face, i think of you
Every drop that i see is how many times i've cried over you
My tears mingle with the rain
I sigh heavily and wipe the tears away
You never did that for me
I look up at the dark grey sky
Lightning splits the sky and i realize that's what u did to my heart
The wind picks up and a faint moan is heard
It was me becasue i can't take the pain anymore
Thunder echoes through the land
The rain falls harder and my clothes cling to my body
Your voice echoes through my mind and i shake my head
I never want to hear it again
My knees grow weak and i fall to the ground
Mud splashed all over my body
I sob harder but no one hears me
The rain gets colder and i'm freezing
I wish i could be in your arms
I slowly get up and try to regain my balence
I lean against a tree and the sun is trying to come out
The sun struggles but finally it bursts out
Sunshine bathes everything
I smile as i just realized something
I will be the sun and burst out of the depression that clouds me
Just as quickly as the rain started, i've gotten over you
I go back inside my house and put you in the back of my head
Never again will i cry over you
Answers: As the rain falls on my face, i think of you
Every drop that i see is how many times i've cried over you
My tears mingle with the rain
I sigh heavily and wipe the tears away
You never did that for me
I look up at the dark grey sky
Lightning splits the sky and i realize that's what u did to my heart
The wind picks up and a faint moan is heard
It was me becasue i can't take the pain anymore
Thunder echoes through the land
The rain falls harder and my clothes cling to my body
Your voice echoes through my mind and i shake my head
I never want to hear it again
My knees grow weak and i fall to the ground
Mud splashed all over my body
I sob harder but no one hears me
The rain gets colder and i'm freezing
I wish i could be in your arms
I slowly get up and try to regain my balence
I lean against a tree and the sun is trying to come out
The sun struggles but finally it bursts out
Sunshine bathes everything
I smile as i just realized something
I will be the sun and burst out of the depression that clouds me
Just as quickly as the rain started, i've gotten over you
I go back inside my house and put you in the back of my head
Never again will i cry over you
Beautiful. Really touches the reader.
You should submit it to a poem competition, you can win prizes like money and scholar ships. I am sure you will win!
omg so pretty i am seriously about to cry
have a star
IT′S BEAUTIFUL. I′M CRYING RIGHT NOW WHILE I′M READING IT. KEEP ON!!!
thats so nice.
but so sad.
i couldn't get some parts.
but then agian i'm a baka T.T
but very nice.
you should totally make it a song!
I love it! It's really beautiful.
that is very nice
I loved it. It very nice and touching. I absolutely loved that and it is beautiful.
ilove it
...u must of been really bored
It is really really good. Bravo.
I'm surprised anyone could write anything so beautiful during social studies. usually I'm just bored to death=]
very pretty.
excellent!!!!!!!! really, this is so good! is this real, though? keep it up!!! i am so glad the poet is getting over this:)
wow...thats really good
That's absolutely very touching and Wonderful.