One more thing...?!
Question: thanks for all of answering the question about my poem. I was just wondering if there is something I could change about it...? and (guys) what would you think if a girl sent this to you, and (girls) would you send this to your boyfriendd?
torn apart the distance it separates us.
tears at our hearts but we won't let it go
we know this is right.
the ability to do nothing, but the need to fly
tearing us apart but we won't let it win.
we knew from the start and we won't give in.
moving thourgh life, zombified.
the need to move on, the want to hide.
I sit here and wait for you,
I know that your waiting too.
dreaming of the day we will be together
its pulling at our hearts,
tearing us apart.
two seperate hearts, two seperate lives.
joined by love.
we won't let it go.
don't let it die.
Answers: thanks for all of answering the question about my poem. I was just wondering if there is something I could change about it...? and (guys) what would you think if a girl sent this to you, and (girls) would you send this to your boyfriendd?
torn apart the distance it separates us.
tears at our hearts but we won't let it go
we know this is right.
the ability to do nothing, but the need to fly
tearing us apart but we won't let it win.
we knew from the start and we won't give in.
moving thourgh life, zombified.
the need to move on, the want to hide.
I sit here and wait for you,
I know that your waiting too.
dreaming of the day we will be together
its pulling at our hearts,
tearing us apart.
two seperate hearts, two seperate lives.
joined by love.
we won't let it go.
don't let it die.
It is very nice but you need to use spell check!