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Question: The beauty with plays is that it’s so versatile; you can watch it on TV, listen to it on the radio, or watch it live on stage. Plays in my opinion do better on stage because you get to connect with the performers visually and feel like your actually apart of the play. It’s easier to capture the audiences’ attention and plus you get the real life effect.


Answers: The beauty with plays is that it’s so versatile; you can watch it on TV, listen to it on the radio, or watch it live on stage. Plays in my opinion do better on stage because you get to connect with the performers visually and feel like your actually apart of the play. It’s easier to capture the audiences’ attention and plus you get the real life effect.

The beauty with plays is that they're so versatile; you can watch them on TV, listen to them on the radio, or watch them live on stage. In my opinion, plays are better on stage because you are able to visually connect with the performers and feel like you are actually a part of the play. It’s easier to capture the audiences’ attention when the actors are 20 feet away from you.

i changed it a little bit and fixed some of your grammatical errors. the "and plus you get the real life effect" part of the sentence sounded awkward so i wrote something different

It's good.

I agree with that.

yes i think that does sound good.
i mean it could be improved,but i don't see anything wrong with it
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You need to change it's to "they" and it to "them".

The beauty with plays is that THEY are so versatile. You can watch THEM on TV, listen to THEM on the radio, or watch THEM live on stage.



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