A short story...comment please?!
Question: Im in the old house where i have once spent my life with you..these dingy rooms still echo the things i have spoken to you..the laughter and the sob..many a fight and make up...I had stuck stickers of stars that glow in the dark on walls of this dark room that once was mine...I remember how excitedly i used to tell you about them...some are intact,still shining a dull green..particularly the jupiter that used to be my favourite....isnt it pretty ironic considering the fact that you have never actually 'been' here..
Its unbelievable that 15 years have passed hence...i was groping through the dust and cobwebs,and i stumbled on a chair..i heard something fall down from it on the floor...a dim blue light lit up from it...its the same old white phone that has been a witness to everything...instinct made me look up for the call history...It was full of the details of our old conversations...138 minutes starting time 0012, 27th january 2008...sleepless nights talking sweet nothings...i went to inbox,checked for text messages and read a random message that went, 'go to bed and text me ill call you'....I hugged the old dusty pillow and curled up on the same old bed,and cried like i used to 15 years back,but this time for a reason i dont know
Answers: Im in the old house where i have once spent my life with you..these dingy rooms still echo the things i have spoken to you..the laughter and the sob..many a fight and make up...I had stuck stickers of stars that glow in the dark on walls of this dark room that once was mine...I remember how excitedly i used to tell you about them...some are intact,still shining a dull green..particularly the jupiter that used to be my favourite....isnt it pretty ironic considering the fact that you have never actually 'been' here..
Its unbelievable that 15 years have passed hence...i was groping through the dust and cobwebs,and i stumbled on a chair..i heard something fall down from it on the floor...a dim blue light lit up from it...its the same old white phone that has been a witness to everything...instinct made me look up for the call history...It was full of the details of our old conversations...138 minutes starting time 0012, 27th january 2008...sleepless nights talking sweet nothings...i went to inbox,checked for text messages and read a random message that went, 'go to bed and text me ill call you'....I hugged the old dusty pillow and curled up on the same old bed,and cried like i used to 15 years back,but this time for a reason i dont know
I think that it pretty interesting. I would like to know what happened or what will happen. it sounds interesting. GOOD JOB
awesome
Excellent plot...but please edit it...
sad but cool!
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Wow. Do I understand it correctly, that this is to take place 15 years from today? I love the part about the phone.