Do you like what you read?!
Question: I wove a silver fabric out of the cocoon i made...i summoned yarns of blue from the kingdoms my mind wanders...i spun my mood into a dark satin..I collected some sparks,took a handful of mist from my fantasy...i added magic and this is what i was left with..a frozen bit of my dreams..
look at the watery haze specked with dots of sparkling blue...do they really not look like a window to one of my dreams...look at her gazing into his blue eyes speaking thousand words in silence...you strain your heart closely..do you now not hear what she says?
Answers: I wove a silver fabric out of the cocoon i made...i summoned yarns of blue from the kingdoms my mind wanders...i spun my mood into a dark satin..I collected some sparks,took a handful of mist from my fantasy...i added magic and this is what i was left with..a frozen bit of my dreams..
look at the watery haze specked with dots of sparkling blue...do they really not look like a window to one of my dreams...look at her gazing into his blue eyes speaking thousand words in silence...you strain your heart closely..do you now not hear what she says?
There is only one word to describe this, WOW. did you write this? it is magnificent! i love it. please let me know if this is your original work.
i wouldn't read what i don't like
That's a pretty good paragraph.
Wow. That's good.
"...look at her gazing into his blue eyes speaking thousand words in silence..."
I like that. It says alot without saying anything.
well i dont read what i dont like so its like i love what i read!!!!!!!!!!!
You have an amazing grasp on the abstact. I love poetry, that's way cool. I'd be honored if you checked out one of mine.
I'm a Capricorn, have hell trying to be abstract- truly impressed by what I read
Shadow born dreams in a dark and misty wasteland
As she fondles my existence in the palm of her hand
Driving me crazy in a way I can’t understand
Marveling sweetly at the pleasure I command
Sharing our warm bodies through the silence of the night
Her soft lips upon mine, making everything feel right
Suddenly I can’t seem to breathe with my passion burning bright
Living out a fantasy in the midst of our twilight
Caressing heavenly flesh, like the waves massage the sea
With every gentle movement taking complete control of me
Worshipping her perfection as we set our desires free
Smiling in the darkness at what has finally come to be
Gazing into her eyes I can’t find the words to say
Hoping that tomorrow will be as magical as today
I just can’t seem to remember ever feeling this way
Drowning in the pleasure of the little games we play
Our twilight is fading as the sun wakes in the sky
Breathing life into the dreams that have taken us so high
And though our twilight may be ending, as the future begins to fly
This passion we’ve discovered, could never, ever die
I think you have got talent keep writing. I have to be honest I probably wouldn't read it because I prefer thrillers and mysteries. But it is good and I'm sure there would be plenty out there that would read it. Good Luck.
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Very Good....