What do you think of my poem? I'm only 12 so how good is it for my age???!
Question: The Glory
You'll know when you are a champion.
You'll feel it in your soul.
You'll remember when you used to feel invisible, but now you know you are invincible.
One day when you're a champion, you'll feel the glory.
You'll be the glory.
You'll breathe the glory.
You'll see the glory.
You'll know when you are a champion.
You'll be told when you become this.
You'll realize that living is harder than dying.
One day when you're a champion, you'll feel the glory.
You'll be the glory.
You'll breathe the glory.
You'll see the glory.
You'll know when you are a champion.
You'll heard the crowd.
You'll know you're on top and that it's going to be hard to stop.
One day when you're a champion, you'll feel the glory.
You'll be the glory.
You'll breathe the glory.
You'll see the glory.
You'll know when you are a champion.
You'll look at your life and replay the things that you've done.
You are the champion.
Now that you are a champion, you feel the glory.
You see the glory.
You breathe the glory.
You see the glory.
You've gotten beyond the chokes and screams, you've found out what it all really means.
Now go tell them how to be number one.
Answers: The Glory
You'll know when you are a champion.
You'll feel it in your soul.
You'll remember when you used to feel invisible, but now you know you are invincible.
One day when you're a champion, you'll feel the glory.
You'll be the glory.
You'll breathe the glory.
You'll see the glory.
You'll know when you are a champion.
You'll be told when you become this.
You'll realize that living is harder than dying.
One day when you're a champion, you'll feel the glory.
You'll be the glory.
You'll breathe the glory.
You'll see the glory.
You'll know when you are a champion.
You'll heard the crowd.
You'll know you're on top and that it's going to be hard to stop.
One day when you're a champion, you'll feel the glory.
You'll be the glory.
You'll breathe the glory.
You'll see the glory.
You'll know when you are a champion.
You'll look at your life and replay the things that you've done.
You are the champion.
Now that you are a champion, you feel the glory.
You see the glory.
You breathe the glory.
You see the glory.
You've gotten beyond the chokes and screams, you've found out what it all really means.
Now go tell them how to be number one.
Awesome. Great poetry, Shakespeare ~.^
I love the poem!!
Awsome! Keep writing, it is great!
ur better than my friend and she's 15
i think it says glory to much but it's still really good im 12 too and i wrote a poem and mine is way way worse than yours
pretty good
since i was 10 i did poems like that. one of them was look in the eyes of aa million lies. you did great keep writeing and thinking!
i think it would be an even better song. Great theme song for the next Rocky.
GOOD JOB NAT!!! THAT WAS REALLY GREAT. KEEP UP YOUR WRITING.
Very Good....Keep on writing them....Hopfully you can get them Puslished....
I thought you was older than 12....with some of your awesome Questions....Thats why you are one of my contacts...
Happy New Year...
you have a real talent keep it up great job
I love your poem!It is awesome for your age.I !LOVE! your name for the poem!But there is one thing:The real glory comes from Christ.
sounds like something out of a famous book. haha, it was THAT good
rofl, i liked ur poem, keep writing !
I like it a lot. It reminds me of Freddie Mercury of Queen, who was a great lyricist and his songs has great positive messages like this one. PS: My poems at 12 really stunk - lol.