Its a poem but please read...is it good?!
Question: the tenderness of his fingertips,
softly caress my own;
as shadows dance on darkened walls,
from the warm candlelight glow
i gently begin to sway,
as music becomes magic,
his hands play over my body,
like a beautiful instrument,
causing the heat to magnify,
with every heart beat of mine
i close my eyes to feel...to sense,
my mind reels with the raw sensation,
as our bodies begin to move,
in accordance to each other
his lips barely touch my own,
with an unquenchable thirst for more...
i arch my back and pull him closer,
but its not enough
in nakedness i lie with him,
the rhythm of my heart matcheds his,
the heat....the incredible heat...
my body glistens,tingling,craving
the moment that time shall stand still
it matters not...the world awaits,
outside my ecstasy,
only that moment in time,
when im touch of my man,
brought me back to life
what do you think?
Answers: the tenderness of his fingertips,
softly caress my own;
as shadows dance on darkened walls,
from the warm candlelight glow
i gently begin to sway,
as music becomes magic,
his hands play over my body,
like a beautiful instrument,
causing the heat to magnify,
with every heart beat of mine
i close my eyes to feel...to sense,
my mind reels with the raw sensation,
as our bodies begin to move,
in accordance to each other
his lips barely touch my own,
with an unquenchable thirst for more...
i arch my back and pull him closer,
but its not enough
in nakedness i lie with him,
the rhythm of my heart matcheds his,
the heat....the incredible heat...
my body glistens,tingling,craving
the moment that time shall stand still
it matters not...the world awaits,
outside my ecstasy,
only that moment in time,
when im touch of my man,
brought me back to life
what do you think?
wow you make me tingle inside with that stuff you poem really touched my heart and i am not just saying cuz you are really in touch with yourself and that is good when it comes to writing poems from the heart and everything else that lies within your soul and heart. also i would love to hear more. p
OMG
DID U WRITE THIS??
IT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...
GOOD
I LOVE IT
I think it's good.
Wow i think i just popped a woody.. but with all seriousness that is pretty damn good
its a 10
wow really good
Wow that's amazing!!! You should enter it in some kind of poem contest!!!
Outstanding. It appears you have a gift for erotica.
I think this is great! It's a very visual poem, and has such a sense of elegance to it as well. If you wrote this, then keep on writing because it's great, and such a well demonstrated act of love. Great job! :)
Your hot, Baby!!!! Let me be your man!!!!!!!!
Absolutely awesome as all your stuff is !
good