What do you think of this poem i wrote? i am 13.?!
Question: I Didn’t Know
You said you’d love me forever
You said you couldn’t live without me
You said I was beautiful
You said I was your only
I said I didn’t believe you
I said you were lying
I said you never loved me
I said that and you started crying
I said I didn’t love you
Oh, why couldn’t I shut up?
I said all those things to you
Why couldn’t I lighten up?
I didn’t know you were true
I didn’t know you wanted me to be your wife
I didn’t know this when I screamed “LIAR!”
I didn’t know this until the night you ended your life
Now I’ll never be your wife
Now I’ll never see
But, now I know
That in heaven, we will always be
I didn’t have the guts to say
That when I pushed you away
I wanted you to come closer to me
Goodbye, my love
Goodbye, me sweet
Goodbye, my lover
Don’t be sad, for now I see
Just know that I will always love you
Answers: I Didn’t Know
You said you’d love me forever
You said you couldn’t live without me
You said I was beautiful
You said I was your only
I said I didn’t believe you
I said you were lying
I said you never loved me
I said that and you started crying
I said I didn’t love you
Oh, why couldn’t I shut up?
I said all those things to you
Why couldn’t I lighten up?
I didn’t know you were true
I didn’t know you wanted me to be your wife
I didn’t know this when I screamed “LIAR!”
I didn’t know this until the night you ended your life
Now I’ll never be your wife
Now I’ll never see
But, now I know
That in heaven, we will always be
I didn’t have the guts to say
That when I pushed you away
I wanted you to come closer to me
Goodbye, my love
Goodbye, me sweet
Goodbye, my lover
Don’t be sad, for now I see
Just know that I will always love you
If you actually wrote that then its awsome.
= ) good job if so!
it's awesome!
continue writing poems!:)
I like it.
Edit: Yikes, Anon is right.
you already asked this and you were 14 before, what happened?
It is all right. But at thirteen, I doubt you know very much about love.
Excellent job.
that was actually good,
YOU ARE A POET DEAR
fabulous
[~%^#]
Ok so like five minutes ago you were 14 and wrote the same poem. Now I dont even think you wrote it
thank you for your effort and a star for you
really good job!
i answered when you posted this the first time...i thought you were 14?
That was amazing
I couldn't write something half that good when i was 13
wow...it's good....but i don't understand how you are 13 now...because in that question you asked about your story you were 14 ...
I'm geussing you really are 14 because your name classygirl93
im geussing you were born in '93 making you 14
13 years old!?!?............. :-) it's pretty good!
kinda depressing
it sounds more like a song
Considering you're 13, it makes me feel really uncomfortable.