Poll whats your opinion on this poem?!

Question:

Poll whats your opinion on this poem?

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poem
One day, long, long ago, there was my wife who surprisingly,
Did not whine, nag or Bltch........
But this was a long time ago.....

And it was just ONE day.

The End

Answers: yeah,kinda short,but very expressive
glad it was just ONE day hehe:P~ um kind of short, and i duno if you should swear in it, but otherwise alright of a poem

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