Which one is better out of the two ?!


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Which one is better out of the two ?


Dark Side Of Black

I am not a hue or visual impression experienced in direction,
I am not a negative connotation that stains an imagination.

I am not a known falsehood in propaganda to create an opponent,
I am not a tragic time embarrassing the damaging nature content.

I am not a rain cloud in a psychological atmosphere,
I am not a curse bursting out of sentimental fear.

I am not a tactic or an ingredient of destruction,
I am not a secrecy unknown or inexplicable in expression.

I am not a witch craft associated with human skull,
I am Black, I reside in the beautiful.

I endeavor to liberate this existence out of the panorama of life,
I no longer can perceive this existence of my being as a gloomed failure.

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Spiritual Rhapsody

Divinity descended to the mortal planes in a manner so inconspicuous,
Faith was a constant companion while I remained so unpretentious.

I was thrown by destiny into his benign presence,
No obstacles ever matched my simplicity and resilience.

Freed from clutches of materialism I entranced in perfection,
Tears of elation sprang out without rhyme or reason.

Destination synonymous to a paradise is the abode of the blessed,
This torch lit by me cannot be extinguished.

A lump of clay transformed into a pot of totality,
Lost in inexhaustible bliss I bloomed to full maturity.


Answers: I completely enjoyed both. I especially liked the use of the metaphors in "Dark Side of Black." I would have to rate it slightly greater than the other. dark side of black Both- 10 your question is hard lolll Spiritual Rhapsody I don't read until tomorrow morning. Hit me up then. I vote for No# 2. Both are excellent...
However Dark Side Of Black seems to have more depth. the first one its very gothic lit type and plus its just about time for halloween and that poem has a very dark feel to it Both are really good but I like Dark Side of Black better. nice
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