Poem by a 13 year old, what do you think?!


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Poem by a 13 year old, what do you think?


Looking in your eyes,
Shows me love never dies,
If we walked on the shore,
Love growing evermore,
Your the man in my heart,
So please spare me a thought,
And catch me when I fall,
Forver More.

I know short but what do you think?
It took me about 3 mins, x


Answers: Its very nice. Well done. I can see it comes straight from the heart. nice work not bad for a 13 yr old. wow! i love it this is actually decent, poems don't have to be long, if you can convey your emotions through just a few words thats fine good but i don't like poems very good. congrats to you. keep writing. it was Very good by a 13 year old
its very touching!
nice
great poem
keep on writing i would like to read some more! very good 3 minutes?

Wow when was your age...it took me a whole day to finish one. That is very good indeed. Well done! :) What man in her heart??? Her Dad???

Other than pretty good. short and good - priceless. awesome! it's good for a 13yr old, even though it isn't a masterpiece. never thought of rhyming fall and more. WOW!
Um... wow.
You're good. Very good.
GO GIRL!! GO GIRL!! NICE**U HAVE TALENT** Very Nice Poem, I Am Surprised It Is By A 13 Year Old Keep Up The Great Work And I Am Sure You Will Be Having Poems Published In Books. I think it's a great poem ? It's good but it lacks emotion and you don't have to make it rhyme. Try things like metaphors, consanances, similies and how sounds have an effect throughout the poem.

Good poems are thoroughly researched (look into stuff other people have written) and they are written and re-written 20-30 times with deep thought given to it before it is shown to anyone.

I like stuff by Allen Poe and William Blake - although it's not the sort of theme you may be into, you can look at the techniques they have used.

Your age shouldn't be a factor into how good your poem is. A good poem can be done equally as well by a 40 year old poet just as it could be done by a 5 year old.

Good luck

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