Tell me if u like this story! i made it?!


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Chapter one: The cat in the attic

I cannot say once upon a time because this story is a story that was repeated once to many times in the wrong way sometimes they talk about fairies and they really don’t know what there talking about they say that they have wings and that they have ears of an elf? Well this story is quite different my story does have magic and wings but what it doesn’t have is ears.
My story begins with the Hawk family they lived in an old wood house in a small town in London; there lived an old woman Catherine Lauren. Hawk, Mrs. Hawk was and old and gentle women and very good looking for her age, and she is very smart not just in mathematics and other subjects, no she is a quick thinker she has a solution for every trouble that comes along but sometimes we don’t have solution for everything, and now we meet her husband George Victor. Hawk, now Mr. Hawk is very the very opposite of Mrs. Hawk is not very good looking and not very outgoing he likes to be alone but he loves Catherine he would die to save her, he has a very long grey beard, and he’s not very bright he cuts to conclusions, maybe that why they say opposites attract because Mr. and Mrs. Hawk are very different, so now this brings us to there only child there fifth teen year old son Jeffrey Anthony . Hawk, Now Jeffrey takes after his mother very bright and outgoing but is much like his father too, he has nice black messy hair, but his father seems to hate his child Jeffrey always felt that his father has neglected him, out drinking and coming home drunk the next day but his mother doesn’t seem to mind she says he has a mind of his own, and it’s a good thing that he toke his good looks from his mother his father was not good looking at all only his eyes and the only thing Jeffrey toke after his father is his father’s eyes that gleam like the night sky, but Jeffrey never liked his father you might think this is something drastic or dreadful or horrific, but there are reasons like, for instance he has never had a chance to talk to his father he is always out getting drunk at the nearby pub or just sitting in his chair outside the house looking for people to shout at, even at dinnertime he does not want talking at the dinner table, so when does he have a chance to talk to him? Only twice he talked to his father or maybe more he could not remember, and when he finally had the time to talk to him he never lets him finish, he always interrupts him, and seems to think that Mrs. Hawk has fallen down the stairs when Jeffrey finally gets threw to him, so you see now why he dislikes his father, no time to chat with him, all the years Jeffrey lived with his mother and father he never once heard them talk to each other.
So he thought it was time to talk like a normal family not being silent at the dinner table, so when the time came they all sat down to dinner and half way threw their meal Jeffrey turned his head to his father and said: “father I think it’s time to for me_”
“Time for you to clean the attic?” his father interrupted him “I couldn’t agree more!”
“No I wanted to ask you if I could_”
“You wanted to ask me if you could take a broom while you’re at it?” said his father cheerfully “Good idea”
So after dinner he walked upstairs solemnly getting the key out of his pocket to open the attic door while he was cleaning he saw something black moving along the floor.
“What is that?” He said to himself
He got his broom and went to take a look, he saw an ugly horrifying cat that looked about a hundred years old all dusty and dirty the cat looked like he hasn’t eaten in days the dirty looking cat looked up at Jeffrey’s face and said “you have your stupid fathers eyes”
Jeffrey jumped he had not expected for the cat to talk!
“What?” laughed the cat “Never saw a cat talk before?”
It was only right to answer the cat so Jeffrey answered him “No sir_ I mean cat I mean_”
“Call me Charles” said the cat cheerfully “And you my boy?”
This was quite odd he never had a conversation with his father but with a cat! It was ridiculous!
“How is it that you can talk?” asked Jeffrey
“Now, now my boy it’s only right for you to answer me is it not?” said Charles sounding a little bit frustrated
“I don’t know who you are?” said Jeffrey
“I just said my name was Charles my boy”
“Yes but I don’t know you” said Jeffrey
“Your father never talked about me?” sounding a little hurt
“He never talked about you or anything for that matter”
“I don’t quite understand?” said Charles “What do you mean?
“Well my father has never talked to me” said Jeffrey uncomfortable he has never talked to any body about this and now he was talking to a cat about his problems maybe this was a dream?
“Never talked to you?” said Charles “This does not sound like the George Hawk I talked to”
“How do you know his name? Asked Jeffrey wanting to know
“Well I’m living in his attic; I think I should know whose house I’m living in shouldn’t I? Said Charles
“Yes I think so” said Jeffrey “and how is it that you live here and why do you talk?”
“You get back to the subject quickly I see? Said Charles “well lets see I’m here because of your old father, and I can talk because of this” he pointed with his tail to a book in a corner
Jeffrey anxious to see why the cat can talk hurried over to the corner and picked up the book sitting on the floor, Charles came over sat on the floor next to Jeffrey.
“You never did tell me your name dear boy” said Charles
“My name is Jeffrey” answered Jeffrey
“Just like your grandfather” said Charles “good man your grandfather was, good man” the cat seemed to be off somewhere else.
Jeffrey could not open the book; he could hear a whisper saying something like “I need the key to open this book” a chill went up Jeffrey’s Spine, he felt something cold touch his face.
“Dear me, forgot the key” said Charles chuckling
Jeffrey saw Charles trying to cough up something then a wad of a hair Charles still coughing Jeffrey picked of the ball of hair and he could feel something inside of it, something hard tearing the ball of hair apart he found a silver key.
“Is this the key?” asked Jeffrey
Charles still coughing slightly answered him “Yes” in a hoarse voice. Jeffrey toke the slimy key cleaned it with his jacket and excitedly put the key in the lock and the same feeling came over him. He opened the book and this gleam of light came shooting out of the book.
“Show off” muttered Charles seeming irritated looking at the book in disgust.
“My Name” said the book “is Merlin”
“Books can talk too?” asked Jeffrey
“Yes they can unfortunately” said Charles
“Keep quiet Charles” said Merlin “Charles and I have been put under a spell”
“A spell? Asked Jeffrey
“Hasn’t your father told you anything!?” exclaimed Merlin
“This young man told me that his father never spoke to him” said Charles “Why is that?”
“I guess he never wanted me” Jeffrey said
No body spoke for a few minutes which seemed like hours, then Merlin said: “well I guess we should tell you everything about our world”
“Your World?” said Jeffrey confused “What do mean by your world?”
“Yes our world” said Charles “our world of magic”
“What is this magic?” asked Jeffrey
“Surely your kidding?” said Merlin “you know nothing about magic!?”
“But they even talk about in this world” said Charles “you don’t believe them do you?
“Well my mother said that it was all nonsense and that it wasn’t true” said Jeffrey “I guess I don’t”


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Your punctuation needs attention. You do have a creative and imaginative mind. Instead of all the "he said's", go to thesaurus.com and find alternate words, like 'quipped', etc.


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