Am a rapper an all my friends like me lyrics an i want 2 know wat u all think be!
Question: Am a rapper an all my friends like me lyrics an i want 2 know wat u all think be truthful!?
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5 gun shots is what u got when u step 2 me with rhymes that's not hot c music is my life its my personality people say i need 2 snap back 2 reality but i am back in this game spittin fire like propane u all know my name Living with no shame life or fortune an fame Just try in 2 make a name 4 myself never will i sell out with wealth i mean i find it kinda funny all u rappers talking about money like u always had it when im rapping in my attic cause im back at it like a crack Addict want a shot at me take a crack at itWww@Enter-QA@Com
5 gun shots is what u got when u step 2 me with rhymes that's not hot c music is my life its my personality people say i need 2 snap back 2 reality but i am back in this game spittin fire like propane u all know my name Living with no shame life or fortune an fame Just try in 2 make a name 4 myself never will i sell out with wealth i mean i find it kinda funny all u rappers talking about money like u always had it when im rapping in my attic cause im back at it like a crack Addict want a shot at me take a crack at itWww@Enter-QA@Com
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"never will i sell out with wealth i mean i find it kinda funny all u rappers talking about money like u always had it when im rapping in my attic cause im back at it like a crack Addict want a shot at me take a crack at it"
^ best lines right there no hate but da first couple lines was garbage 2 me!.!.!.i like ur other song alot better but da lines i highlighted right there flow nice together if u do it right keep at it though and get a micWww@Enter-QA@Com
^ best lines right there no hate but da first couple lines was garbage 2 me!.!.!.i like ur other song alot better but da lines i highlighted right there flow nice together if u do it right keep at it though and get a micWww@Enter-QA@Com
da endin was good in my opinion, but yo lines is too short, try advancin each line!. one thing i do is rap wit 4 rhyming lines, have da first three be short and simple, then have da 4th be long n hard!.
use more advanced words also, unlimited potential wen u read da dictionaryWww@Enter-QA@Com
use more advanced words also, unlimited potential wen u read da dictionaryWww@Enter-QA@Com
look man i used to rap even worse than u when i started!. u have to listen to good rap music and adjust your style accordingly!. Try to put more effort into your lyrics and dont write the 1st thing that comes to mind!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
eh, work on it and you will get better!. in time a better grasp of how to twist your words will start to show!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Use punctuation next time!. They're kind of garbage to be honest!. You try too hard!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
yeah its alright just step up your vocab
but the ending is slickWww@Enter-QA@Com
but the ending is slickWww@Enter-QA@Com
I'm not a rhymer neither and I don't own a beamer
But how about next time you use a little meter
Don't use paragraphs or whatever you did
All that seems strange and a little weird ya dig
But i ain't hatin I just can't relate to what you sayin
you possibly are the worst rapper!.!.nah I'm playin
You somewhat descent,You should put yo rhymes in the precinct
no guns for me I don't want this rap thing extinct
But brainstorm on your topic make sure it's the hottest
weed,cars and girls is what they rappin
Meanin everyone is speakin on it,I'm still creepin on it
Tryin to take it out,hey,but the people want it!.!.whateva man peace!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
But how about next time you use a little meter
Don't use paragraphs or whatever you did
All that seems strange and a little weird ya dig
But i ain't hatin I just can't relate to what you sayin
you possibly are the worst rapper!.!.nah I'm playin
You somewhat descent,You should put yo rhymes in the precinct
no guns for me I don't want this rap thing extinct
But brainstorm on your topic make sure it's the hottest
weed,cars and girls is what they rappin
Meanin everyone is speakin on it,I'm still creepin on it
Tryin to take it out,hey,but the people want it!.!.whateva man peace!.Www@Enter-QA@Com