I wrote a song and i would like to know...?!
Question: I wrote a song and i would like to know!.!.!.!?
!.!.!.your opinions
it's supposed to be a tragic about lost love(for ex: dad, friend!.!.etc)
plz be honest and tell me if it's good or bad
i don't break that easily
thanks:)
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Open Misery-by princess fakunle:)
The sky is getting darker
The rain is pouring tears upon my
Demolished face
I should’ve never let my feelings
Go to waste in outer space
Pre-ch:
So now I see
Fire surrounding me
It’s never ending
And I’m bleeding
All over me
In this open misery
Ch:
Cause if you saw the love I had for you
You would’ve known
That I actually cared deeply for you
Even though I never let it show
V2
Your name carved in stone
Fading every time I come alone
My eyes are coloring in red
I don’t even care if my makeup is ruined
I’ll give you more than roses
As long as you’re happy up there in rapture and
Pre-ch:
Ch:
Bridge:
Unleash and release my tears
Until they fall heavily
I’ll smash and torture
Until I collapse on my knees
I’m shaking
I’m breaking
Everything is black and white
My mind is hypnotized
My body’s paralyzed
My lungs are dying
I can’t seem to breathe
You once existed
You once stood here and
All is regretted never forgotten
Pre-ch:
Ch:
The sky is getting darker
And you are floating away
Farther and fartherWww@Enter-QA@Com
it's supposed to be a tragic about lost love(for ex: dad, friend!.!.etc)
plz be honest and tell me if it's good or bad
i don't break that easily
thanks:)
--------------------------------------!.!.!.
Open Misery-by princess fakunle:)
The sky is getting darker
The rain is pouring tears upon my
Demolished face
I should’ve never let my feelings
Go to waste in outer space
Pre-ch:
So now I see
Fire surrounding me
It’s never ending
And I’m bleeding
All over me
In this open misery
Ch:
Cause if you saw the love I had for you
You would’ve known
That I actually cared deeply for you
Even though I never let it show
V2
Your name carved in stone
Fading every time I come alone
My eyes are coloring in red
I don’t even care if my makeup is ruined
I’ll give you more than roses
As long as you’re happy up there in rapture and
Pre-ch:
Ch:
Bridge:
Unleash and release my tears
Until they fall heavily
I’ll smash and torture
Until I collapse on my knees
I’m shaking
I’m breaking
Everything is black and white
My mind is hypnotized
My body’s paralyzed
My lungs are dying
I can’t seem to breathe
You once existed
You once stood here and
All is regretted never forgotten
Pre-ch:
Ch:
The sky is getting darker
And you are floating away
Farther and fartherWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
I love it
I wish that you could record it and give me a copy =(
because those lyrics are exactly what i am looking for, because they describe me at this moment!.
Keep writing
and after you get all the answers you want on here, delete this question because someone might try to steal your song!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I wish that you could record it and give me a copy =(
because those lyrics are exactly what i am looking for, because they describe me at this moment!.
Keep writing
and after you get all the answers you want on here, delete this question because someone might try to steal your song!Www@Enter-QA@Com
WOW!!!! That's like really good!. You should put that on youtube singing acapella!. Keep it up!. That could get you big money one day!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I love it! It's so powerful!Www@Enter-QA@Com