What do you think of these lyrics? Good/Bad?!


Question: What do you think of these lyrics!? Good/Bad!?
this is one of my first songs that i wrote!.!.!. early early this year!.!. tell me what you think!. PLEASE DON'T STEAL IT SERIOUSLY!.

Verse 1
Am I better off keeping it a secret!?
Or should I let you know and watch you fade away…
Maybe you’ll be happy and you’ll keep it,
Maybe it’s not my fault I feel this way…
About you,
I love you,
I love you,
But it’s too hard to say…

Pre-Chorus
I guess I should continue pretending you’re with me
I guess I see something that isn’t reality,
But still there’s that hope that someday…

Chorus
I don’t know why,
I don’t know when
I don’t know how
But maybe someday you’ll love me too x2

Verse 2
Is it silly that I think about you!?
I think of you every moment of the day…
Oh I can’t stand it being without you,
Why don’t you fall in my arms oh please just stay…
I want you,
I love you,
I love you,
More than I could say…

Bridge
How must it feel to know that
You’re on my mind all the time!?
You’re on my mind all the time
Please can I help it!?
How must it feel to know that
I love you more than anything!?
I love you more than anything!?
Please can I help it!?
I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Please can I help it!?
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Answers:
From the way that you wrote and arrange the lyrics, it looks like you already have a melody to go along with it!. I think the lyrics are really cool, and very expressive, that you not only meant it as a song, but also as a true expression of what you are feeling!.

Once you completed the song, any chance we can listen to it on youtube or something!? I would really like to hear it!.!.!. Www@Enter-QA@Com

I like the rhyming and choice of words, but i don't really know how it would sound like so the only thing i fear is that it might sound a little repetitive!. if you're writing this for a love partner then it's definitely a heart warmer!. overall good jobWww@Enter-QA@Com

WOW i like it sounds like a really catchy song, or maybe that was the tune i was singing to lol!. If you could find the right singer you could probly make it big!.
Yae for You!
High FiveWww@Enter-QA@Com

It's a good song, keep trying!.

You just need to know the difference between a good song and a hit!.

Keep trying, you're on your way!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

It it is you the writer it's very impressive SincerelyWww@Enter-QA@Com

hmm 3/ ^^ but keep tryiing thats what i do =3
~*Kelly aka Sexy KittenWww@Enter-QA@Com

Bad!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

u got talent but i wouldnt steal it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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