I wana become a singer but wat ya think on my lyrics?!


Question: I wana become a singer but wat ya think on my lyrics!?
Here they are my lyrics!. The song is the same as prima J Corazon but the lyrics are diff!.

My heart is talking to you

Yo J!.r Ya know

*Chorus*
Don't worry im here for you
Every day will go through
I have your back you don't have worry worry
My heart is speaking to you

*Verse 1*
Sometimes you try something new
And you don't do it right
Cause ur mind is in
But your heart is out

(Yeah I know)4x

Its the reality of life
That has me confused
You could do the right thing
But then you have something to lose

(Yeah I know)3x

*Chorus* 2x

*Verse 2*
People are in war
You have chose a side
You can never hide
So Why would i lie

I know I know I know I know

Its a total war I know about that
Your fear has to go and ur emotions have to shine

Yeah I know I know yeah I know

*Chorus* 2x

Hey ya

If your thinking about giving in , Stop And listen closely
Don't worry about failing, I will do my best to help you!. We are in together yeah we are in this together yeah!. If your thinking about betraying yourself!. Stop and think about it!. Listen well cause J!.R knows what he is sayin!. Cause we are in this together cause we are in together!.

Don't worry im here for you ( No, no)
The day is movin on( pass it)
I will always have your back don't worry worry
My heart is speaking to you

Don't worry Im here for you( u,u,u,u,u,u,u,u)
These days are moving fast( So fast)
I will have your back forever ever
My heart is talking to you

We will keep on fighting

Hey Hey(Don't worry im here for you)
Those days are gone(So gone)
I will have your back don't worry
My heart is speaking to you

Don't worry your not alone (no no no no no no no no)
These days are going along
I promise you I will be with you with you
My heart is speaking to you

I promise you I will be with you with you
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Answers:
well now!.!.!.it all depends! is this a rap or are you actually singing it!?!?!?
i can tell by reading this that you spend a lot of time focusing on yer lyrics!.!.!.and that's good! my dad's a choir director and has had many bands of his own!.!.!.as well as my brother having his own record deal and all that fun jazz=]
your tune can be totally amazing but the lyrics are wat ppl pay most attention to!.!.!.because they like stuff that relates to their life!. try to find yourself in your music and when you do!.!.!.you'll know your ready to be a singer!.

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I love these lyrics! They are really uplifting and positive!. I absolutely LOVE them! Follow your dreams! You are defiantly star material! Www@Enter-QA@Com

The lyrics are pretty good, but you should really think about writing your own beats to go with the song if you want to go anywhere with it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

WOW thats really really good be proud that you have a gift!. Use it, Love it! G Luck in the future!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com


there are some pretty good lines in there!~ keep writing ^^Www@Enter-QA@Com

VERY NICE! I like how you repeat things more than once like, "Yeah I know" and "No"
Is the part that goes, "If your thinking about giving in" supposed to be a rap part!? 'cause it's all jumbled up, like you say it fast er something!.!.!.
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