Are these lyrics any good? ?!
Question: Are these lyrics any good!? !?
It's a song i wrote called "raindrops"
(verse 1)
I don’t see how it could be this hard
Just to say what’s on my mind
I feel like I’m falling apart
And this life can’t rewind
(Pre chorus)
If I could do it over
I would
If I could take everything back
You know I would
Because
(chorus)
These words are on the tip of my tongue
I just can’t seem to find the way to say it
This heart can’t take anymore
And it’s breaking apart bit by bit
Can someone save me from myself
Save me from myself!.
(Verse 2)
I feel like there’s no one I can trust
No matter how hard I’m trying
I can’t think of how to explain this in words
Except that I feel like crying now
(pre chorus)
If I could do it over
I would
If I could take everything back
You know I would
Because
(chorus)
These words are on the tip of my tongue
I just can’t seem to find the way to say it
This heart can’t take anymore
And it’s breaking apart bit by bit
Can someone save me from myself
Save me from myself!.
These raindrops
Keep falling down on me (x6)
These words are on the tip of my tongue
I just can’t find the way to say them!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
(verse 1)
I don’t see how it could be this hard
Just to say what’s on my mind
I feel like I’m falling apart
And this life can’t rewind
(Pre chorus)
If I could do it over
I would
If I could take everything back
You know I would
Because
(chorus)
These words are on the tip of my tongue
I just can’t seem to find the way to say it
This heart can’t take anymore
And it’s breaking apart bit by bit
Can someone save me from myself
Save me from myself!.
(Verse 2)
I feel like there’s no one I can trust
No matter how hard I’m trying
I can’t think of how to explain this in words
Except that I feel like crying now
(pre chorus)
If I could do it over
I would
If I could take everything back
You know I would
Because
(chorus)
These words are on the tip of my tongue
I just can’t seem to find the way to say it
This heart can’t take anymore
And it’s breaking apart bit by bit
Can someone save me from myself
Save me from myself!.
These raindrops
Keep falling down on me (x6)
These words are on the tip of my tongue
I just can’t find the way to say them!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
this is actually not bad!.!.!.!.
i tried singing it i really like it!.!.!.
the chorus could use just a little bit more rhyming but if that's the way you like it then you should keep it that way!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i tried singing it i really like it!.!.!.
the chorus could use just a little bit more rhyming but if that's the way you like it then you should keep it that way!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
yes awesome song i think im going to steal it and use them as my own!.!.!.!.could be something that anyone would say!.!.!.!.never post something like this on yahooanswers!.!.!.!.because you never know!.!.!.you could turn on the radio one day!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yeah they are really nice
It'd be cool if you did picking or arpeggios or something (depending on what your accompaniment is) for your intro!.!. raindrops right!?
I like!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It'd be cool if you did picking or arpeggios or something (depending on what your accompaniment is) for your intro!.!. raindrops right!?
I like!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i think it's great!!! i like the chorusWww@Enter-QA@Com
Dude!.!.!.Im a lyrist and I like it!. Its awesome!.!.!.Make it longer though!.!.hahaha maybe you and I can make an EP!.!.LoLs!.!.!.Keep writing!Www@Enter-QA@Com
It depends on what kind of music is going with it, but yea!. They lyrics are pretty good ;)Www@Enter-QA@Com
those lyrics are amazing :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
they're awesome!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
pretty good!. i likesWww@Enter-QA@Com