Rate my Lyrics please..................!
Question: Rate my Lyrics please!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
It's Called "I'm sorry"
I don't know what to do
All the problems on my mind
It's hard to keep you happy
cause your the sensitive kind
I face all the yelling
and crying every day
I try to cheer you up
but you just push me away
I feel terrible so bad
and I know that's your objective
but its so so soo hard
from my friends to get rejected
I please for you to forgive
cause we are all made up of dirt
I'm sorry that your feelings feel
bad
I'm sorry that they're hurt!.
[Chorus]
But days like this will go away one day
But if you keep screaming at me, that's
just making a delay!!!!!! Oh babay
yeahhhhhhhhhhh oh weeya
Someday I'll see that u love me
even if you yell
Someday I'll find someone who loves
me, some one to tell
I'm not finished yet though, but that's What I have so far!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I don't know what to do
All the problems on my mind
It's hard to keep you happy
cause your the sensitive kind
I face all the yelling
and crying every day
I try to cheer you up
but you just push me away
I feel terrible so bad
and I know that's your objective
but its so so soo hard
from my friends to get rejected
I please for you to forgive
cause we are all made up of dirt
I'm sorry that your feelings feel
bad
I'm sorry that they're hurt!.
[Chorus]
But days like this will go away one day
But if you keep screaming at me, that's
just making a delay!!!!!! Oh babay
yeahhhhhhhhhhh oh weeya
Someday I'll see that u love me
even if you yell
Someday I'll find someone who loves
me, some one to tell
I'm not finished yet though, but that's What I have so far!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Its hard to tell, since you didn't specify if its meant to be a rock song or a rap song, or etc!.!.!.
but based on the lyrics
its good
but please try to make it hard to tell the chorus and the other parts since people may steal it, or just show them to your friends!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
but based on the lyrics
its good
but please try to make it hard to tell the chorus and the other parts since people may steal it, or just show them to your friends!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I'm sorry, but your lyrics make too much sense to be put to music!. Perhaps you could add a few unintelligible words,screaming, and some profanities!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
They're good lyrics, maybe mix up the rhyme scheme a little, make it more complex!. Good idea though!. Like the context!.Good work, God bless <3Www@Enter-QA@Com
I please for you to forgive
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its just ok, you want to improveWww@Enter-QA@Com