My Song please tell me if good!?!


Question: My Song please tell me if good!!?
I wrote a song that's similar to Taylor Swift's Love Story!. Same tune, but shortened!. It is based on a real life experience!.
(first verse)
We were at school when I first saw you
I closed my eyes and the flashback started
I'm sitting there, in the courtyard thru autumn air
See that girl see her hair and her ball gown
You look at her then she leaves
Your sitting all alone, little did I know
That you were Romeo you were hanging on
But your crush said "Stay away from Juliet"
And now I'm crying on my stair case begging you please don't go
And I said
(chorus before key change)
"Romeo, love me!. I've been feeling so alone!.
I'll be waiting!. All that's left to do is run"
You ignored me, you didn't show me any love
I walked away, feeling good, feeling good cuz
(key change)
I had the right feeling that you wanted her instead
I thought of us but that was all in my head
How could I know if it was really worth it!?
It's a love story, pretty please say
Yes
Please, say yes
And don't go, no, no
Once I loved you
But now I can't stand
You

What do you think!? Be honest!.Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
wow amazing
thats awesome
u hav talentWww@Enter-QA@Com



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