Help! Im trying to write a song?!
Question: Help! Im trying to write a song!?
This is what i have so far!.!.!.!.
I wish that you could just see
just what its like to be me!.
Hiding myself behind this mask of shame
knowing I’m the only one to blame
I wish you would just know
Just what its like to be in this show
Playing myself like I would want to be
Knowing that this is what I want them to see
I sit here hitting the ground
wishing someone hears my true sound
maybe some day you will understand when youve freed me
from what I have pretended to be
any suggustions for anythingg moree, and should i fix anything!?!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
I wish that you could just see
just what its like to be me!.
Hiding myself behind this mask of shame
knowing I’m the only one to blame
I wish you would just know
Just what its like to be in this show
Playing myself like I would want to be
Knowing that this is what I want them to see
I sit here hitting the ground
wishing someone hears my true sound
maybe some day you will understand when youve freed me
from what I have pretended to be
any suggustions for anythingg moree, and should i fix anything!?!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
wow, very good rhyming, but generally what artists may do is (in your case) put the 2nd line 3rd and the 3rd line second!. For example:
I sit here hitting the ground
maybe some day you will understand when youve freed me
wishing someone hears my true sound
from what I have pretended to be
But from one song maker to another, dont let anything limit you, whether it be mkaing sense, rhyming or any of that!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
I sit here hitting the ground
maybe some day you will understand when youve freed me
wishing someone hears my true sound
from what I have pretended to be
But from one song maker to another, dont let anything limit you, whether it be mkaing sense, rhyming or any of that!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
You freed me and did not now, dont ever leave, dont ever go
I know you're near and i can feel the fear, inside of me!.!., i wanna break free, wanna be me!.
Hope I helped, i love writing song too, you should have a point, like if it a sad song make it sad>
What does your song mean!?!?!? O!.OWww@Enter-QA@Com
I know you're near and i can feel the fear, inside of me!.!., i wanna break free, wanna be me!.
Hope I helped, i love writing song too, you should have a point, like if it a sad song make it sad>
What does your song mean!?!?!? O!.OWww@Enter-QA@Com