HERE ARE MY LYRICS PLEASE TELL ME WAT U THINK?!
Question: HERE ARE MY LYRICS PLEASE TELL ME WAT U THINK!?
Please tell me what u think of them i am 12
Here arer my song lyrics i wrote
I walk with him hand and hand
To school every mornin
I go to him when I need help
And hes always there for me
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Step by Step Youll lead me through this
Breath by Breath He'l tell me what to doo
Day by day well get through this together
If we take one step at a time
Your kingdom is beautiful
Your palace is graet
Oh I can wait to walk through the gates
And see all the angels abouve
REFRAIN
who cares about the past
who cares about the future
Just care about today!
ITS TODAY!!
And just be happy about that!
REFRAIN
Step by Step
Breath by Breath
Day by Day
Well get through this together
Oh Ya
One step at a time
Oh YA
OH LORD
OH YA!!!!!!!
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Here arer my song lyrics i wrote
I walk with him hand and hand
To school every mornin
I go to him when I need help
And hes always there for me
REFRAIN
Step by Step Youll lead me through this
Breath by Breath He'l tell me what to doo
Day by day well get through this together
If we take one step at a time
Your kingdom is beautiful
Your palace is graet
Oh I can wait to walk through the gates
And see all the angels abouve
REFRAIN
who cares about the past
who cares about the future
Just care about today!
ITS TODAY!!
And just be happy about that!
REFRAIN
Step by Step
Breath by Breath
Day by Day
Well get through this together
Oh Ya
One step at a time
Oh YA
OH LORD
OH YA!!!!!!!
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Answers:
its an amazing song but you encountered a few spelling errors but all in all i think if you submitted that song in a contest you could win especially because it sounds like its comingg from the heart!!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
you're 12!? good job! i would start the first chorus with a bit of a story!. Ask yourself when writing it, why are God and you they taking everything day by day!? the second chorus!.!.!. do you mean can'T wait to walk through the gate like heaven!? you should have a purpose for each and think of the thing you want to got across to the listener!. good job though, you could become a famous song writer!:DWww@Enter-QA@Com
to me it seems more like a deep poem!.!.!.try writing the lyrics in third-person perspective!.!.!.but on the other hand its still good just try to make a third-person perspective!.!. thats what i did with my songs and they actually came out betterWww@Enter-QA@Com
pretty good for a 12 year old!. im 13!. id give urs a 8/10!. keep up the good work!
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nice! i'm 12 too and i love music! when's ur bdayWww@Enter-QA@Com
It's pretty good, since that your 12!. However, I'm kinda confused what your message is or what your song is about!. Im not sure if its about god, a boy, your hero, or something else!. Great work though and keep on writing! Www@Enter-QA@Com