DO YOU LIKE MY SONG? I NEED FEEDBACK!?!
Question: DO YOU LIKE MY SONG!? I NEED FEEDBACK!!?
This is a song i wrote!. What do you think!?
Verse 1:
Every time I look at you
my heart begins to break
this invisible feeling you give me
is more than I can take
Can't you see me walking right beside you
Everytime you move
Please tell me what is wrong with me that makes me
invisible to you
Chorus:
Can you tell me why i'm not real to you
And you just make that true
As you laughing with your friends
My misery never ends
And I am like the statue
but baby back at you
i guess everytime i cry
i will think of another guy
Everytime
Verse 2:
Why is is everytime
my heart falls apart
with each step you take away frome me
is harder on my part
you think the other girls are better
but do you know what they do!?
to get your attention and earn love from you
*chorus*
Chorus 2:
And I guess you learned you lesson
cause next year came around
you wanted me but i
turned you down
Can you tell me why now i am real to you
and you just made that true
now i am laughing with my friends
and your misery never ends
and now your the statue
guess you got back at you!?
i guess everytime i cry
you won't be on my mind
Everytime
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Verse 1:
Every time I look at you
my heart begins to break
this invisible feeling you give me
is more than I can take
Can't you see me walking right beside you
Everytime you move
Please tell me what is wrong with me that makes me
invisible to you
Chorus:
Can you tell me why i'm not real to you
And you just make that true
As you laughing with your friends
My misery never ends
And I am like the statue
but baby back at you
i guess everytime i cry
i will think of another guy
Everytime
Verse 2:
Why is is everytime
my heart falls apart
with each step you take away frome me
is harder on my part
you think the other girls are better
but do you know what they do!?
to get your attention and earn love from you
*chorus*
Chorus 2:
And I guess you learned you lesson
cause next year came around
you wanted me but i
turned you down
Can you tell me why now i am real to you
and you just made that true
now i am laughing with my friends
and your misery never ends
and now your the statue
guess you got back at you!?
i guess everytime i cry
you won't be on my mind
Everytime
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Answers:
Ohhh! I liked that a lot!.
That was really good!.
I love how you reverse the feelings you felt to what the other person feels as well!.
The concept was good, the words could use some tweaking here and there but overall it was really good!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
That was really good!.
I love how you reverse the feelings you felt to what the other person feels as well!.
The concept was good, the words could use some tweaking here and there but overall it was really good!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yeah, it's good!.!.!.but I see alot of songs that were written about the same topic!.
It's always about liking someone and them not liking you back!! It drives me insane!. There is not criticism in the song (except capitalize your I's please, it's really annoying to read a song that doesn't have good grammar in it) but I am just sick and tired of people writing about the same thing over and over again!Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's always about liking someone and them not liking you back!! It drives me insane!. There is not criticism in the song (except capitalize your I's please, it's really annoying to read a song that doesn't have good grammar in it) but I am just sick and tired of people writing about the same thing over and over again!Www@Enter-QA@Com
it all depends on the beat it sung in
but its actually very good
it could use a little revising though
with the tune i was singing you might want to change a couple things
like laughing with my friends should be laughing at you!.
also instead of and you just made me cry change to and why u made it true!.
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but its actually very good
it could use a little revising though
with the tune i was singing you might want to change a couple things
like laughing with my friends should be laughing at you!.
also instead of and you just made me cry change to and why u made it true!.
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Wow, sounds like your song is full of emotion and meaning!. I enjoyed reading it!. It even made me think of a few things in my life, but other than that, amazing!. It'd prob be better if I heard it actually being sang!. But anyways, good job!. :D Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yess it sounds Brilliant to me,, but it would be even better if we could hear the music to it, maby if you sing it or just play the song and add a link to it!. Well done it sounds cute! xWww@Enter-QA@Com
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Wow that is actually really really good!. The first lyrics ive ever seen anyone post on here that has me impressed!. Bravo! Www@Enter-QA@Com
That sounds perfect do you got a good tune to go with the song!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
itss so nice !! ^_^Www@Enter-QA@Com
Very good!. add some screamo to and its GANGSTA!! Www@Enter-QA@Com
I like it! Good job!.
have a good day/night!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
have a good day/night!.Www@Enter-QA@Com