Plase..Tell me what you Think About My Lyrics!?????!
Question: Plase!.!.Tell me what you Think About My Lyrics!!????!?
Maybe someday I will take the road and run away
I'll do the best for me
I'll think what's best for me
Love should never be above
Chorus
I'll take a breath(take a breath)
Relax and Stay In the rain(with you)
I'll run away(run away)
And won't come back for a long time
I'll calm my mind(my mind)
I'll be sitting in front of the sunset(with you)
I'll be Thinking about the life
I'll be waiting for a miracle
Or I'll be wasting my time
hmmhmmm hmmm hmmm
Love is the life
Love is the secret
Love is all we want
(Love is for all)
Love is the secret of living
Love is the life's meaning
One day you'll cry for nothing
One day you will keep asking
What's love!?
You just want to be loved
Yeah yeah yeah yeah Lálalala
Yeah yeah yeah yeah humm hummm hummmm
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Please tell me what you think about my Lyrics!.!.
I came from Brazil!.!.So u can Help me to Fix my lyrics!.!.
TksWww@Enter-QA@Com
I'll do the best for me
I'll think what's best for me
Love should never be above
Chorus
I'll take a breath(take a breath)
Relax and Stay In the rain(with you)
I'll run away(run away)
And won't come back for a long time
I'll calm my mind(my mind)
I'll be sitting in front of the sunset(with you)
I'll be Thinking about the life
I'll be waiting for a miracle
Or I'll be wasting my time
hmmhmmm hmmm hmmm
Love is the life
Love is the secret
Love is all we want
(Love is for all)
Love is the secret of living
Love is the life's meaning
One day you'll cry for nothing
One day you will keep asking
What's love!?
You just want to be loved
Yeah yeah yeah yeah Lálalala
Yeah yeah yeah yeah humm hummm hummmm
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Please tell me what you think about my Lyrics!.!.
I came from Brazil!.!.So u can Help me to Fix my lyrics!.!.
TksWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
totally awesome!! no mistakes!Www@Enter-QA@Com
these lyrics are really good!. theres this great website called webook!.com where you can submit your work for feedback and you can also read other peoples stuff and submit comments!. its really helpful and has lots of people!. great site!. you should definately check it out!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Very Good + Sweet
but i'm kind of sick of hearing love songs
No offense, just my opinion!. Its still a
really good song!<3
and you don't need love to live!.
its an emotional happy feeling :DWww@Enter-QA@Com
but i'm kind of sick of hearing love songs
No offense, just my opinion!. Its still a
really good song!<3
and you don't need love to live!.
its an emotional happy feeling :DWww@Enter-QA@Com
it would make a great poem but for a song idkWww@Enter-QA@Com
wow ! that's amazing !!
good luck with the song :)
Www@Enter-QA@Com
good luck with the song :)
Www@Enter-QA@Com
ummm wow i mean its a nice sing but usualy it dosent matter when songs dont rhym but u could at least have a little rhyming in thereWww@Enter-QA@Com
thats sooo good!!! ur really talented :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
aw i love it!!Www@Enter-QA@Com