Rate and hate the lyrics?!


Question: Rate and hate the lyrics!?
This one is titled "Tilted Nose"

I first got the guts to talk to her and asked if i could sniff her
her fragrance was bland but i seen the fun i could have with her
besides she was a white b***h, awaitin a crisis
my hunger sufficed by the simple fact that i sacrificed it
I cant lay lifeless my head's spinnin and heart poundin
lettin my thoughts drown in the ocean of star countin
I can scale a large mountain but wont get out the chair
unless to peep thru the hole cuz i could swear someones watchin me there
but lo and behold: nuthin!.!.!. she calls me paranoid
it comes with the territory and only she can repair the void
when i let her help, it just digs my grave deeper
another deadly sin for God to give the gate keeper
she dont scream when i cheat her or abuse her
cuz she knows that every f***** person who snorts is a user
and she knows we have no future, so where she hits it dont hurt
see how can i be sorry when the punishments never worked
shes taught me a thing or two
cuz i recognize the game plan, im my own man, id never sing for you
Its not that i couldnt, but its my refusal to
any woman that wants to say that she loves me then prove you doWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
lol, yeah I had a problem at a point in my life with the same white *****, this was a good metaphor, kinda been done before but as always I like your rhyme scheme and the flow of it, I also liked your take on it I'd give it a 8 outta 10, still my fav!. RHH user who post lyrics!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

I love how no one actually rates it, and just comment!.

Try reading the question people!.

Great lyrics, I'd say 9/10!.
You have some creative flow to it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Interracial love is a beautiful thing!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

nice metaphor!.
pretty dope!.
8/10Www@Enter-QA@Com

its pretty creative!. Id rate it a 4 out of 5Www@Enter-QA@Com

instresting!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

its alright!.!.!.but no woman wants uWww@Enter-QA@Com



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