What do you think of my song ?!
Question: What do you think of my song !?
This guy wa son my mind so i wrote a song!.!.
what type of music would go with it !? thanks !.
“Never Have You”
Verse 1:
I can never tell you how I feel
I’m always unsure on what you’d say
Would you hold me close
Or walk away !?
Your just too unpredictable
Why am I stressing over this !?
For so long !?
I think of you when I wake up
Before I go to sleep
During school
And almost every minute of my day
Chorus:
I stare out my window
Its raining
But the coldness doesn’t bother me at all
Just the fact that I may never have you
Your telling me
That you never see it on my face !?
When I look at you !?
When I talk to you !?
When I give you a hug
How I always hug tighter !?
Are you that blind !?
Chorus 2:
I can never, ever
Walk up to you and say it to your face
That “I Love You”
Verse 3:
I watch you from afar
Sometimes I think its best that way
Yet sometimes I think its stupid
I wish it was you who asks me whats wrong
I wish it was you who’s always there for me
Can’t you see!?
I need you
Chorus:
I stare out my window
Its raining
But the coldness doesn’t bother me at all
Just the fact that I may never have you
Your telling me
That you never see it on my face !?
When I look at you !?
When I talk to you !?
When I give you a hug
How I always hug tighter !?
You boys are so clueless
Chorus 2:
I can never, ever
Walk up to you and say it to your face
That “I Love You”
Chorus 2:
I can never, ever
Walk up to you and say it to your face
That “I Love You”
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what type of music would go with it !? thanks !.
“Never Have You”
Verse 1:
I can never tell you how I feel
I’m always unsure on what you’d say
Would you hold me close
Or walk away !?
Your just too unpredictable
Why am I stressing over this !?
For so long !?
I think of you when I wake up
Before I go to sleep
During school
And almost every minute of my day
Chorus:
I stare out my window
Its raining
But the coldness doesn’t bother me at all
Just the fact that I may never have you
Your telling me
That you never see it on my face !?
When I look at you !?
When I talk to you !?
When I give you a hug
How I always hug tighter !?
Are you that blind !?
Chorus 2:
I can never, ever
Walk up to you and say it to your face
That “I Love You”
Verse 3:
I watch you from afar
Sometimes I think its best that way
Yet sometimes I think its stupid
I wish it was you who asks me whats wrong
I wish it was you who’s always there for me
Can’t you see!?
I need you
Chorus:
I stare out my window
Its raining
But the coldness doesn’t bother me at all
Just the fact that I may never have you
Your telling me
That you never see it on my face !?
When I look at you !?
When I talk to you !?
When I give you a hug
How I always hug tighter !?
You boys are so clueless
Chorus 2:
I can never, ever
Walk up to you and say it to your face
That “I Love You”
Chorus 2:
I can never, ever
Walk up to you and say it to your face
That “I Love You”
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Answers:
i thought is was really good, i would say pop, ^my opinion^ i think it could have a good beat XD and some singers make songs by Inspiration and this guy waz yours so i dont think that a bad thing,just dont let him get u to down =) hope i helpedWww@Enter-QA@Com
Not bad, but stop pining over someone!. Never chase love, but let love chase you!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
First Im sorry but thats the worst song I have EVER read/heard 2nd get a life and stop stressing over love if you think its the rite person for you you get the nerve and talk to them and stop stalking that person either talk to him or let him come to you and just be open for love!. ps!. My love advise is to go to that person and tell him how you feel!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It gets exactly to the point!.!.!.
And that's what I personally don't like at all!.
You need to make it a quest!.!.!. A challenge!.
Don't just automatically throw the answer out there and cry the world ur sorrows!.
Use better words!.
For example:
"I just stare out my window" = "My mind just wanders out the glass window"
But other than those minor details, the song's pretty great :]
Keep working on it to make it better! [:
xWww@Enter-QA@Com
And that's what I personally don't like at all!.
You need to make it a quest!.!.!. A challenge!.
Don't just automatically throw the answer out there and cry the world ur sorrows!.
Use better words!.
For example:
"I just stare out my window" = "My mind just wanders out the glass window"
But other than those minor details, the song's pretty great :]
Keep working on it to make it better! [:
xWww@Enter-QA@Com